| "THE BOYZ" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm starting to hate you because reading your stories are making me take time away from writing mine. Damn you! Why are your stories so funny and interesting. Besides that, this had me laughing my ass off in the middle of the night.
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: January 28, 2003 22:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I would like to see TK and Ranma compete in the King Of Fighters. Bring many old enemies of the DBZ and Dragonball that is not powerful as Freeza like Goku's older brother,Nappa,Zarbon,Any remaining Freeza's troops,Dardorian(pink guy),Pilaf and his two lackeys,etc. Please write sequal to the BOYZ very quickly! |
Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
nice fic, please can you finish it |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: January 03, 2003 23:46 CST
Comment/Review:
You finally updated this fic! You do know TK and Ranma is more powerful then Kaiser since they are trained by Vegita and Gohan and they get knocked out because Kaiser surprised them and who would win,Gohan or Ranma if Gohan doesn't get mad or go Super Saiyan since both have trained when they were kids. Cologne better watch out since Vegita can easily kill off every Amazans. I would like to see how Gohan meets Videl and they fallen in love with each other and the next foes should be Biabee,Dabura and Majin Buu for the Z-fighters which means writting the Buu saga and adding Ranma,TK and the others in. |
Reviewed By: SerpentTreize [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANOTHER TOTAL KICK ASS FIC BY THE GREAT ROBSTER. Dude, I'm starting to become a big fan of your work. I hope that you will update this fic as soon as you can. I'm still sticking to FanFiction.Net, but I plan to come here so I can check out your work here, since it seems that you will mostly update on this site than the other. |
Reviewed By: Feonix On: September 21, 2002 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm maybe I should consider moving off FF.net to here. Seems like a nice place. I already reviewed your story on FF.net but anyway. Great job! Your story flows well and your POV's consistently hit the charecters personalities well. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: TRIGUN(LOVE AND PEACE) On: September 07, 2002 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great(squeel!) |
Reviewed By: Ashley Akaihi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2002 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it would be great if you somehow stuck Inu Yasha somewhere in there...= P |
Reviewed By: Gabriel On: July 15, 2002 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really Great fic -C. Rose- has some points but they dont really matter its still 1 of my av fics |
Reviewed By: heero yuy On: February 17, 2002 06:51 CST
Comment/Review:
please write some more and soon |
Reviewed By: duo maxwell On: February 15, 2002 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
great fic please write some more soon |
Reviewed By: C. Rose On: February 15, 2002 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is pretty good, but it has a lot of things about it that I just don't understand. Why would Piccolo need a house to stay in? That one more than anything else confused the hell out of me and you never did explain it.
The rest of it was pretty good over all and you at least take a little time to go over it an correct some of the spelling mistakes, though I did see a few in there. Over all that was decent as well.
Finally, I think this could be tons better if certain parts of this were expanded an detailed. Like Ranma and TK's training, how things worked and how TK ever developed the ability to fight in the first place. The only thing I saw mentioned was that the had seen Terry Bogard fight on a couple of occation and he picked it up? Blink...blink...is that even possible? How? |
Reviewed By: Spaceman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 03:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it!
PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! |
