| "Intervention" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Fate Bringer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please please please write more!!
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Reviewed By: C.C. Lynn On: January 24, 2007 02:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: Kinzie Strife [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 01:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn.... you have to add another chapter! That's evil and unfair that you didn't. You need to post soon. I mean it!
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Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 05:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely one of the few fics that I will continue to follow. Thanks for the corrections. I can't wait to see the rest of this wonderful piece of work. I've enjoyed every chapter so far and hope you continue as quickly as possible. Very few grammar, spelling, or puncuation errors. (My biggest pet peeve) I'm happier than you can imagine to finally find a fic that is updated regularly and is well written. If you can't tell it's been awhile............
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Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you could correct the last two chapters, I would read those and probably give you a much better review. It's a riveting story and the first three chapters are well written, precise in grammar and puncuation. The last two, however, are smashed together without proper spacing so I didn't even bother reading them. I look forward to continuing this story and can't wait to see more on this particular fic.
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