Reviewed By: Saiya_asakusa On: May 18, 2008 04:43 CDT Comment/Review: Oh WOW! Your very good at writing and your idea is cool too! I hope you'll try at complete it...
Reviewed By: lovely liz On: February 12, 2006 22:13 CST Comment/Review: so far its good need some work thats how things go in time in the begging so in tell the next chapter