| "The Fullmetal Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 23:51 CDT
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Oh, I love this already. ^_^ When Ed arrived home in Resembool, I jsut started singing "He did it! He did it!" The third chapter had a bit more grammatical errors then the others, but it still wasn't that terrible. I'm pretty much dying over here for more, so...pretty please? With sugar on top?
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Reviewed By: Washiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 19:42 CDT
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Excellent fic so far! I always love the theoretical science fanfics. It took me a few seconds to remember the paradox though... I think I can see where it's starting to affect the storyline. This is an absolutely brilliant idea and I hope that you continue soon! Thanks for the wonderful fic.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 15:23 CST
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I love this!!!! I have a feeling though things won't go as hoped. I kinda feel sorry for Ed, having people he loved die for him, even when he didn't show emotion to his father. Anyways, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:43 CST
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Interesting. As i've yet to read any of the manga all I have as a point of reference is the anime. I'm going to goolge the physics paradox as you suggested so I'll have a deeper understanding of what's going on in this fic. I would say that you have a great start and I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing ~fute~
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