| "Here Comes Santa Claws" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akakoken On: January 12, 2006 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything!! Mwahahahahaa!! o.o...*blink blink*...Everything about this fic, I mean. I just started reading it the other day, but I think that it's really awsome. Very original idea, compared to everything else I've read so far, and the whole Kanna thing right now is very mysterious, which is good, really good. Not to mention the whole Inuyasha/Kagome thing going on, with the arguing and Inuyasha being all protective and stuff...the spelling and grammar's really good too. I think I've only seen about 2 mistakes, and I can't even remember what they are, hehe. I also really like the style of your writing, because it's not too descriptive, but it still good for helping me visualize everything. Although, I keep picutring Inuyasha in a big red suit...I'm having trouble fitting the beard into that picture, though...heh heh. Anyways, keep up the great work, I'm really looking forward to more chapters!!
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Title: ch 8
Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: January 08, 2006 13:33 EST
Comment/Review:
Another couple of good chapters. Kanna is really starting to get creepy, what with her non-existent being. Question: if someone were to happen upon her hiding place, would they be able to see her since she has no aura except for the magic mirror she has? Since Inu and Kaede have both felt a disturbance, will Kagome notice it too, seeing as she is untrained, and does Miroku have any spiritual powers in this fic? Speaking of Miroku, how did he come to live there, or will you address that in future chapters? Keep up the good work, looking forward to more twists and turns. Just stay away from plunnies!
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just luv it pls continue pls *smile*
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: January 03, 2006 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, especially with your food for thoughts. ^_^ big smile! and btw, kagome, kiss him. hahaha.... cya bbbeleana ps. are you gonna continue your other stories like on the leash?
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Reviewed By: illnevertell On: January 03, 2006 07:46 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!! its such a cute story i just can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Xia-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 23:13 EST
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KISS HIM KAGOME!! I'll Trade places with you!!! Lol, Love the story
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12_01 On: December 28, 2005 00:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv the story pls update
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Reviewed By: inuyasha222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 17:49 EST
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This is on of the best fanfictions I have ever read please update sooon.
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Title: ch 5
Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: December 27, 2005 15:29 EST
Comment/Review:
Another cute chapter...glad you figured out how to introduce Hojo to the mix. Sango and Shippou also seem to have more than their fair share of secrets they're keeping...all part of the plot, I suppose. Your chapters seem shorter than in your other stories, but I'd rather see short chappies than none at all *(cough, cough--"All of Me" cough, cough)*--my fave of your fics so far! Keep up the good work!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kagomedragonfiress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 00:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story can u make some more inu hojo momets and inu gets jelsoe and is this an inu&kag fic plz be a inu&kag fic do u hear me santlaura plz
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 07:51 EST
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that was great but u know u can use baka instend of idiot
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: LavenderRose(nsi) On: December 24, 2005 18:23 EST
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Cute chapter. So the plot thickens a bit, what with the appearance of Kanna...hmmm, what could they be up to? Kouga is dumb as ever. Hope you get feeling better soon, and have a wonderful holiday season yourself!
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 23:55 EST
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That Kouga...dumb jock of the youkai world. :) Great story. I like it.
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 23:55 EST
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This is very cute so far. I hope you continue. :)
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Title: Bravo!!
Reviewed By: MikoKrazy777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 23:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story! please keep updating and keep up the good work! ~Rachel p.s. i love your other stories too
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