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Title: 007 Pokemon style
Reviewed By: dragonmaster86 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly LOVE this fanfic. It's definetly in my top 5 list! I can't wait until Ash and Misty admit their feelings for each other! Please continue writing this story!
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Reviewed By: RadicalDreamer02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz write more... |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 06:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! I agree with the others, this fanfic is totally cool. You have a great sense of imagination! The grammer was a little wrong as you forgot to take new paragraphs and some words went missing at the start of people speaking but other than that, this fanfic is great! I really hope you continue it soon, I am really interested to see how the story unnfolds. It took a while to read this fanfic but I have read longer so I don't mind. I really did not know what to make of the fanfic as you had no summaries and the chapter titles are a litlle confusing but, no matter, it was an awesome fanfic and I hope you continue it soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: April 20, 2002 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank GOODNESS someone agrees with me!!!!!!!! The only reason I don't think many people have read your story and added a review is b/c I don't think people really want to read through the whole dang thing b/c I know a lot of people who like short fanfics but PLEASE don't stop writing because of them because I know me & RadicalDreamer Love your fic. Or rather RadicalDreamer & I lOVE your fic!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Finish your fic!!!!!!! I was just waiting for someone other than me to put a review so I could say what I just said!!!!!!!! Thank you RadicalDreamer thank goodness someone other than me knows how to read long fanfics!!!!!! Go Us!!!! (Trys to high five the computer didn't work very well I GUESS oh well) Oh yeah I just have to say this
And the longest review person who thinks the author actually reads them goes to Drumroll Please!!!!!!!!!
Blondie And the crowd goes wild!!!!!! Sorry bout that I just had to put that! HEHEHEHEH!!!!!!
Well in and Out!!!!
Blondie~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
Reviewed By: RadicalDreamer On: April 14, 2002 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally agree with Blondie!!! That was the best pokemon fanfic i ever read! yes it took up my whole weekend to but i like long stories=) EXTREMELY creative, i mean Ash as a secret agent?? i loved how it was different from all the other stories i've read! it was a bit confusing how like u left out a word or two in the beginning of sentences, o well, great newayz! PLEEZE,PLEEZE,PLEEZE write the next chapter! i'm dying to find out what happens!!! u have a terrific imagination! T.T i cant write fanfics!!!
it must of taken a while to write that story but it was soooooooooooo good! ^-^~RadicalDreamer |
Reviewed By: Blondie On: March 11, 2002 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Whew that took me all weekend and a Monday to read!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot you ruined my whole weekend!!!!!! (Not really I had a lot of other things to do so that's why it took me 3 days!!!!! And I'm a really slow reader!!!!!!!
But anyways I LOVED it!!!!! I liked how you made Misty sassy and good at athletics!!!!! She is isn't she!!!!! You didn't put Brock in their a lot but hey that's O.K!!!!!! Ash well........ I never would have thought to have him as a secret agent but heck it's creative and that's all that counts isn't it? Well some part of it was hard to follow because it kind like said stuff like Ash said and then you woundn't finish it but that's O.K I mean it must have takin you a VERY long time to type it so Oh well!!!! I thought your writing style was very good and your imagination must be huge to come up with all these ideas!!!! hey how did you come up with the idea for Ash to be a secret agent anywazs? O.K some things are just better not to be asked right? Well write the next chpter soon!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! You said you wanted a comment so I gave you one!!!! Oh yeah and your summories really suck!!!! Try & make it more intresting like saying "What would happen if in the near future Ash in the gang spilt up and Ash becomes a top agent for a secret group called the MASTERS!!!" And like "What ever happened to Misty & Brock when they left Ash? And does Brock EVER get a girlfriend? And will Ash and Misty EVER express their feelings towards each other? Find out when you read my exiting tale! (O.K you have to admit that was better than All grown up!!!!!!!!!! (Yeah go me!) And PLEASE think up better titles too!!!!!! But a good story none the less!!! Sorry I wrote so much I just felt your story needed a lot to say about it!!!!!! So PLEASE write morePLEASE!!! I really like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 O.K I really have to stop writing now!!!!! My mom is just about to come upstairs and I'm not suppose to be on the computer!!!!!!! But I just had to finish your story and add a comment!! So bye!!!
Blondie~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
