Title: Best Fic Ever. Period.
Reviewed By: GreenEyedFloozy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it utterly insulting that your amazing story has yet to get a review other than mine. This is by quite a ways the best story in this fandom that I've ever read. It's got a believable plot, amazing grammar and characterization, and best of all, it gives a strong and plausible explanation for everything that happens. There's not even once during this fic that I thought (and I frequently do) "Oh, come on, that could never happen", or "Wow... That scene came out of nowhere, what was with the sudden jumping?" Not once. I loved how the story was kept a decent length (not two pages or a three hundred page monster fic), and it showed in the pace of the story. It flowed perfectly. Not too fast, not too slow. And hey, we got very, very yummy brother!slash at the end, which was a nice little present in itself. The explicit stuff was amazing, by the way. Very, very few authors can pull off that type of command in sex scenes, and I won't even start about the amazing happening of you managing to keep Conrad in character while being commanding in such a way. Utterly brilliant. It's really a shame that less people will read this because of the incest(Which isn't usually my cup of tea, but your writing is really and honestly too good to pass up), because this is by far the best unpublished writing that I've ever read. I know it's been almost two years, so I'm not hoping too too much that you'll continue, but I'll keep watching to see if it does. Fics this good don't come around terribly often, and it's a shame that some people won't even give it a shot because of such a silly thing as 'cultural taboos'.
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