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| "Bubblegum Avatar #1 -- "Tin-Sell City"" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Dartz_IRL [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Scores say it all. Averages out to 8.75. Round up to 9. Good, nice reading fanfic that kept me interested. Given how apathetic I've been lately, that's bloody impressive. Noticed a few spelling hiccups, but it's no worse then myself. Too bad she's dead as a dodo. Right when she was getting good too. Oh well. Such is life. -Dartz
| Reviewed By: blehx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are very few self inserts that aren't just a load of author ego stroking, and this is one of them. The characterizations were spot on for the Sabers, character development, and slow burn for the various potential romances are very enjoyable and kept me wanting to read the next chapter even though it was closing in on 2am.
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