| "Dream On" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Anime_Lover_3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 12:30 CDT
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Love the story whens the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 15:34 CDT
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This is really good, pleaseupdate soon!!!
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story, but please space out your story, it is really hard to read
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, hey, as long as you're writing, that's all that matters. Besides, I'd love to see more Saki-chan moments (god, that would be awesome, female emo sasuke, so funny, so awesome, SO HOT!). Heh, Anyway, I like the story, I WANT MORE!!! So hey, if it is a while to the next chapter, it comes with the territory. One thing, could you do something about the spacing? It's a little awkward sometimes reading it in one huge block like that, the lines can get confusing and mixed up sometimes when reading it like that. If you fixed that, while editing the previous chapters, that would be great. Anyway, later.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its 2007! Update please!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 23:03 CDT
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that was very nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Inuyasha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a story that I have been waiting for, for a long time. I'm so glad I found one that hasn't been abandoned. Itachi story is brilliant, and I cant wait to see the shock form everyone expecially Sasuke when they are told what really happened. One question: When is Sakura going to come in the picture? Good work and keep it up!!! Intil next time!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 16:57 CDT
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not half bad, a Naruto tale with some unique direction. (I know this is a usual complaint) ONly wish updating more often was possible for you, but thats life. Still continue this story, I'd like to see where it leads. Not only that, but what about how Kakashi and Iruka act in private? Put in some more face time with Iruka in there, and whoever Ino is interested in (please make it Choji, he's the big-boned king!) Anyway, keep this story coming!!!!
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Title: Sasuke's back in Konoha!....well sort of ( Chapter 4 )
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 13:18 CDT
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whoa Sasuke
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Reviewed By: The Judge [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just change the way it wrote out like the first two chapters and it will be good with me. also no yaoi please. i will allow bi through if i like story
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Reviewed By: xaikon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 10:45 CST
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cant wait for more :)
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Reviewed By: going-SuperNova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 16:17 CST
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ok really sweet story update soon please what will happen next will sasuke come back will itachi see our new naruto?? with all of his strongnesss hehe
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Title: Kakashi finds out
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 21:27 CST
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oh I like Haku but he's dead and his reason for living is dead! Do you really want to bring him back even though his reason for living is gone? That's mean... Sasuke/Naruto
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 05:18 CST
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Naruto/Sasuke?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 05:15 CST
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Ah man this was awesome!! I can't wait to read more! um what's the pairing? Is there pairings?
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