| "The Hearts of the Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 08:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KOUGA!!!!!!!!!!!! ok now that i have gotten that out of the way. Welcome back. I was waiting for you. I love this story. Usually I pass up stories that have Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru "sharing" Kagome. But this was very tasteful. I await the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 10:59 PDT
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Wow! What a chapter! I just knew Kouga was done for when he gasve her that necklace. *sigh* *sniff sniff* Interesting little scene with Sess wanting to be dominated. Love it that Sess spared Kouga, even if he bit the dust later. Yes, I just about choked when I read the name Nakori. At least, even if she's back, she shouldn't be mated to them anymore since she died once, right? (Or maybe not?) Such a sad, angsty ending to this one. Great job.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 03:01 PDT
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Oh, yay! I was so excited to se a new chapter of this story! Nice one! Interesting tidbit about Kag's longing for Sess. Nice of her to try to relieve Inu's guilt, too. I'm glad Nakori is gone. Interesting the way you had Ichiro rescue Sess. This is very well-written, and so original! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 22:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK. YOU ARE SO ASOME. dark inu
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 13:40 PST
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Really nice chapter! I liked Shippou going to talk to Rin. And Kenta seems to have accepted their friendship --(see? some men CAN mature! LOL!). So, Nakori needs(wants) the brothers now, huh? Kind of stupid of her to let them actually MATE her, wasn't it? She should ahve known what the results would be. Or did she plan to kill them? Do the brothers not realize the danger that puts Kagome in? Surely they know that Nakori will want to kill her to get them back. Interesting that Inuyasha feels guilty, but Sesshoumaru doesn't seem to. And is Inuyasha's guilt because he feels he betrayed Kagome? Or because he couldn't tell it wasn't her? Or both? I think he and Sess should talk about the situation with each other AND with Kagome. I'm sure she'll forgive them, but it might hurt her. I guess she hasn't really had time to think about it since the fight with Nakori. I absolutely love her friendship with Kouga -- I hope he finds another mate and has some kids of his own. I really, really like the way you are writing him and his situation. Sesshoumaru thinks Kagome's powers will be weakened by her mating with two youkai -- will he be wrong? (I hope so!) Wonder what he is having Totosai make for her? Would Kagome really go through the well if she thought she might not be able to get back now that she is mated? That's a big risk. Will she take Inuyasha with her? Might give them a chance to talk about things. Shippou's going to be a daddy, huh? I'm sure kagome will want to talk to him about what he did and what he should do now. I am enjoying this story SO MUCH! I hope you get a chance to keep writing so you can post more soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:00 PST
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Woo hoo! What a chapter! Loved it! I'm so glad she chose both -- I was sweating it. BUT, where's the fallout from the two brothers having mated the illusionist? Did they actually MATE her? (If so, aren't they obligated to her -- at least until she dies?) And yes, they were tricked, but wouldn't it still be a little hard for Kagome to accept that they had been with her so recently? And, really, since they both accepted being with her together when it wasn't really her, then there wasn't really a question as to whether or not they were willing to share the REAL her. And if they were with the fake kagome for 3 weeks, then Inuyasha wasn't quite so inexperienced, was he? Heck! The brothers had already had practice as to how to work the threesome thing. (I'm annoyed with them for falling for the trick -- they couldn't tell it wasn't her. Hmph. LOL!) Well, at least Kiyoshi is out of the way now. But that darn Naraku/Ichiro still has the jewel. I can't wait for their further adventures. With the 3 of them together, it's going to be fun!! Of course, we've got the whole Shippou situation to deal with, too. There's so much good stuff still to come -- I love it!! Write more soon, please!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 05:55 PST
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Had to write a little more. Chapter 6, in particular, is one of my all-time favorites. Love kagome waking up with both brothers! Then we see their "talk" with the ske the night before. They "forgive" each other. They ask each other why they love Kagome. "Because." It's brilliant. Then the humor with Sess throwing Inu out the window the next day because he mistakenly made a move on him thinking he was Kagome -- priceless! And then, Sess talks to her, followed by Inu talking to her. Poignant moment when she asks if this is how it's always going to be: first one, then the other. I've gotta hope not! Let them all 3 sit down together to a good life. (Of course, there's the jewel and Naraku ...) Anyway, just awesome!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 01:30 PST
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Wow! Just found this story and started reading it. It's awesome!! I thought at the beginning that you had dsaid it would be a Sess/Kag/Inu pairing -- I'm still hoping she can have both! Kikyou seems to keep telling her she can. You have done such a fantastic job of story-telling here. I am just in awe of your talent. What a wonderful, unique plot. The characters are terrific -- the relationships and interactions are top-notch, too. I'm totally hooked! And I know the whole "who will she choose" question is a big part of it, but gosh darn it! She's just got to have both of them. They both need her, and she deserves both of them. I've read many stories that pitted the two brothers against each other for her -- some that even seemed to be going the route that both would win her, and in the end, she always ended up with only one of them and the whole story just fell flat. Of course, all I can do is beg -- and keep reading! Hope you have more of this excellent work done soon. Loving it!
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 18:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad I found this little 'jewel'. Hope to see more updates soon. Very well done so far and my interest are totally piqued. Bravo!
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a fantastic story, cant wait for the update
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Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 15:16 PDT
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i love this story! keep up the good work. i think Kagome deserves too have 2 hot guys for mates, after all she's been through! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98(nsi) On: September 22, 2006 13:50 PDT
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Awsome story so far!!! I love the way its going!! and pretty original too!!! I can't wait to read more so please keep writing!!! I'll be waiting!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 22:05 PDT
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hope you keep writing..cuz i wnaa keep reading!!!
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Title: woohoo
Reviewed By: Kagome Suteki Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah kagome remembers everything. I cant wait for the next chapter please update.
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Reviewed By: InuYoukai24 (Not Signed In) On: September 06, 2006 10:07 PDT
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Whaa!!
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