| "The Hearts of the Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 20:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great! I love the suspense. The idea of not knowing who she will end up with in the end is wonderful. Of course, like the other reviewers, I am biased as to whom I would like to see Kagome with. Since I am a Sesshoumaru lover...then of course it would be him. Alas i will continue reading waiting to see who you chose. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 12:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!!!! A cliffy!
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Reviewed By: Sexychicklet17 *logged out* On: July 24, 2006 18:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely story! Update soon yeah?
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 21:47 PDT
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Is this Inu/Kag or Sess/Kag? I really don't like Sesshoumaru, and Kagome if paired with him then it will just make me angry. Please post the pairing in your summary. Otherwise, I won't read further. 'Sorry, but I don't like nasty surprises when I expect to be reading an Inu/Kag story. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: alissa On: March 26, 2006 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! I REALLY LOVE THE STORY AND IT HAS A INTRESTING PLOT. SO PLEASE WRITE MORE.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh, Shippo you sure that was a good idea. Sango and Miroku want to see ya. Hurry! Please update.
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Reviewed By: CuriousGeorgia On: March 20, 2006 08:16 PST
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Is this an Inu/Kag or Sess/Kag story because I don't want to waste time reading it if it is Sess/Kag. That pairing never works unless one or both of them are OOC. So please let us know who the pairings will be. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 01:03 PST
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And oh yeah! I want Inuyasha and Kagome together. I'm a die hard Sess/Kag fan, but in this story Inu/Kag seem to have that chemistry together that makes your heart melt
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 01:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing style and grammar is a bit mixed up, and sometimes you jump a little... I get the feeling you don't proof read... hehe... anyway, I love the story so far. The enjoyment of it outweighs those stupid little grammar things any day. This is going on my favorites.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 20:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it please update!
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Reviewed By: 33andobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2006 18:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am really enjoying your story, I hope that you continue soon. It will be interesting to see who Kagome chooses - I almost hope that she picks both brothers. What will Naraku do now? Keep up the great work!
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Title: Fabulous
Reviewed By: Twiknham [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful beginning. You received a nine for S&G only because tenses sometimes get shifted (go/gone). Please continue to write this excellent story, I will continue to read.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: December 21, 2005 09:00 PST
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You have to write more and update as soon as you can. This sounds very, very interesting and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Malice_Babe On: December 21, 2005 03:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really great, but I just wanted to ask if you could make Inuyasha and Sesshomaru both have Kagome? Because then, neither of the brothers will be alone and they'll both be able to bask in "being" with Kagome. Please update soon and think on my suggestion. Awesome story by the way!!!
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