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Reviewed By: love_Inu(logged off) On: January 09, 2006 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg OMG ILOVE IT!! I F'N LOVE IT!!! PLAESE UPDATE SOON ERVYER WORD I READ MAKES ME WANT TO CRY B/C I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!
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Reviewed By: blackmidnight On: January 08, 2006 02:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You asked if there was something in the anime that said if the jewel shards were what allowed Kagome go through the well. I think the jewel shards is the reason that Kagome can go through the well, at least according to episode 19. I love your story!!!! Your style is so cool!!! Keep up the good work!!!!! Was Inuyasha in deamon form when Kagome saw him in her dream? And then in her dorm room?
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Title: You asked for it! XD
Reviewed By: Hanajima [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Trapped by the review vortex! Of course, you've just signed up to read a pile of my comments.XP Thank you for the fluff, it's pretty much how I pictured it! Cute! *fangirl moment* I feel kinda bad for poor Steve, though. o.o; So, you're deciding to be nitpicky? To answer your question, volumes 7-8 contain a part that can be interpreted as stating Kagome's need for the shards for her well passage. I could swear that she also says it once, but I can't find that right now. It's OK if there is, because a)Takahashi violated that herself, once, and b)assuming that the jewel granted Inuyasha's wish (and actually they've never actually said that the jewel grants wishes, but we don't like to think about that. XD), you could say that part of it was allowing them to be together no matter what, thus the being able to time travel thing. Workaround! I'm glad you're going to let them go back down the well, I was worried they'd be stuck. By the way, how come Inuyasha couldn't come through the well in the first place? I may have missed it because of reading this at 3a.m., but I'd like to know. ^^; If I may submit a suggestion, this chapter seemed a little too list-y to me. Um, I mean that at parts your sentences just seem to all start by stating stuff that happens. It's fine the way it is, but you could think about that if you want. Anyway, I'm looking forward to future chapters, because I just have no idea what's going to happen now! And more fluff, of course. ;D Again, great fic!
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Reviewed By: inugurl112 On: January 07, 2006 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt I must review in order to see the new chapter! I can't wait!! Your Fanfic is awesome!! Great job and keep goin!
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Reviewed By: marbear411 (not logged in) On: January 07, 2006 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until The Next one!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hanajima On: January 07, 2006 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now, I was compelled to review by my need for a new chapter - good strategy you have there. So everyone else better review too... ;D I'm really enjoying this fic, because it's suspensful, plausible (so I'm not flying into a 'that can't happen' rage every 3 sentences. I do that. Really), and I'm holding out for some fluff. So there better be fluff! *rawr* XD Oh, and the part about Inuyasha overcoming his demon side and keeping his heart on her enough to wish to be with her is very sweet. Anyway, keep going, your fic is great!
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Reviewed By: Jaimyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall good chapter, but i do not think kagome would hav 'sat' him so many times :)
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:06 CST
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I love that you made it seem he was going to turn into a demon but in the end wanted to be with Kagome this happens to one of my favorite story.
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Reviewed By: PhantomAngel (nsi) On: January 04, 2006 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really original. i like the plot and the story, keep it up
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Reviewed By: PhantomAngel (nsi) On: January 04, 2006 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really original. i like the plot and the story, keep it up
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Reviewed By: teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 23:57 CST
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What in the world is wrong with you?????!!!!!!!!! YOU SHIPPED KAGOME OFF TO AMERICA AWAY FORM INUYASHA!!!!! You better pull of something crazy like Inuyasha comes to visit her or something! *frantically runs around the room screaming* on now that i've calmed down i can say that I like how the story is going so far. Let me tell you that you had me caught off gaurd when Inuyasha wouldn't go with Kagome. (I'm sure you have youre reasons) I love your Tiva character she reminds me of me except that my hair is a dark emerald and i have green eyes, the complexion is the same though. he he. I'm kinda wondering what you're gonna do next but new ideas come with the new years. I know that much! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 23:51 CST
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My brain is tingling....I love your story. It's really cool to see Kagome out of her comfort zone. I love how she's adapting. And I'm glad she decided to confide in her roomate. Where did you get the name Tiva from? It's great! I'm working hard fleshing out parts of my story. I'll have it updated asap. Keep up the good work! Jessica
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Reviewed By: inu&kagome4eva On: December 30, 2005 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it so much but to me i would have loved for inuyasha to have gone with kagome to america. And i enjoyed it so mauch that i can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: SWEET BABY G On: December 29, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that is such a good fan-fic. please finish it u r just leaving me in suspence please finish it. it the best fan-fic i have readed in a while and i read alot of them and i'm hard person for rating's. so bravo
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Reviewed By: Marbear411 On: December 29, 2005 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love This Fanfic You Have to Keep Going With This Story!!!!!I Will Tell Everyone I know about This Fanfic And I know alot of people!!!^o^ Bold
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