| "Breaking Ties" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: PhantomAngel (nsi) On: January 04, 2006 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really original. i like the plot and the story, keep it up
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Reviewed By: teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 23:57 CST
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What in the world is wrong with you?????!!!!!!!!! YOU SHIPPED KAGOME OFF TO AMERICA AWAY FORM INUYASHA!!!!! You better pull of something crazy like Inuyasha comes to visit her or something! *frantically runs around the room screaming* on now that i've calmed down i can say that I like how the story is going so far. Let me tell you that you had me caught off gaurd when Inuyasha wouldn't go with Kagome. (I'm sure you have youre reasons) I love your Tiva character she reminds me of me except that my hair is a dark emerald and i have green eyes, the complexion is the same though. he he. I'm kinda wondering what you're gonna do next but new ideas come with the new years. I know that much! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 23:51 CST
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My brain is tingling....I love your story. It's really cool to see Kagome out of her comfort zone. I love how she's adapting. And I'm glad she decided to confide in her roomate. Where did you get the name Tiva from? It's great! I'm working hard fleshing out parts of my story. I'll have it updated asap. Keep up the good work! Jessica
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Reviewed By: inu&kagome4eva On: December 30, 2005 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed it so much but to me i would have loved for inuyasha to have gone with kagome to america. And i enjoyed it so mauch that i can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: SWEET BABY G On: December 29, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that is such a good fan-fic. please finish it u r just leaving me in suspence please finish it. it the best fan-fic i have readed in a while and i read alot of them and i'm hard person for rating's. so bravo
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Reviewed By: Marbear411 On: December 29, 2005 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love This Fanfic You Have to Keep Going With This Story!!!!!I Will Tell Everyone I know about This Fanfic And I know alot of people!!!^o^ Bold
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Reviewed By: Dark_Tigress On: December 29, 2005 10:35 CST
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YOU ARE AWSOME. I challenge you to write one in which they are all modern (still demoney and all),grow up together , get separated, and meet all over again on an internet chat site. I started one a while back and never posted it. have fun if you decide to accept the challenge.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
$_$ Did you say famous and cute? Kags give him a chance I mean four years is a long ass time .Im not saying to marry him or anything you know just...(does a bunch of weird motions) know what Im saying . Go back to InuYasha just later.
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 23:44 CST
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I don't think you're bashing America. Hey, I live here too and I completely agree with you. What part of the states do you live in? I'm in Alabama but I'm from Virginia. Can't wait to see some more of Inuyasha. I also can't wait to find out how this Steve guy fits in to everything. Write more soon. Also, I'm going to do some revisions to my story so keep an eye out. It needs a little fleshing out so I'm going to work on it. Hope to read more later!
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Title: hi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kagomedragonfiress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i like your stories plz update
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Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 13:55 CST
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I can't wait to see how this story plays out! I think Kagome's anger might be a little occ but what's the point of writing a fanfic if you can't change the characters a little, right? I think you're doing a great job. I'll update as soon as I can, promise.
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Title: Really Good!
Reviewed By: Fiery Goddess On: December 23, 2005 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! PLEASE UPDATE!!! *makes puppy dog eyes*
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: lucawindmover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love InuYasha. That's my favorite anime. Have you ever read anything by Sueric? She is a really good InuYasha fanfic writer. I love the idea of InuYasha and Kagome in modern America. I can't wait to see where you take this.
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Title: OMFG SOO GOOD
Reviewed By: Hottmama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS SOO AMAZING KEEP WRITING I NEED TO READ MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE KEEP WRITING WENCH hehe just kidding about the wench part heheh KEEP WRITING i'll cheer you on KEEP GOING and you can read my fanfics too keep going yup keep going (i kno i'm a freak)
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Reviewed By: inuHanyouLoVer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 15:02 CST
Comment/Review:
oh wow thats really good....i just started writing fanfic too....but mine arent as good please update soon
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