Reviewed By: ObtuseNeneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 18:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Congradulations on your first two chapters! The story is good, I liked the way the characters exspressed themselves. Although it would help if there was a little bit more background on why she had to marry, but it is your fic and I think you have done a wonderful job so far. Good luck on any effort you put forth on this story. ~~~Those who can't write, review!~~~
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