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| "The Sweetest Music" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good, though it could really be any lover, well not any but a great deal of people... I like how it's open like that though^^ Ja ne, ~Mari-chan~
| Reviewed By: TearfulInsanity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so... poetic. I love it! It is definately one of my favorites. There is just one thing; I wish you had something instead of "cock" and "pre-cum". I feel that such crude wording takes away from the overall feel of the piece. If I may recommend something like "length" and "liquid" or something like that. Don't get me wrong; I really love it, but everyone has room for improvement! ^_^ Keep up the great work and never give up that which gives you joy! ~Silver
| Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 13:41 CST
Comment/Review:
cool! ^^ Kurama sure does know what he's talking about! ^^
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