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Reviewed By: maranjade@yahoo.com On: December 23, 2005 06:06 CST
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I really like it it's original. Are you going to have the necklace be a necklace or are you going to have the dragons actually attach to her skin? (Like jewelry glued on) Please update soon.
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Title: The Necklace
Reviewed By: mcowell529 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 19:54 CST
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I think that so far your story has a lot of potential. What happened to Souta? Is he still trapped in Kagome's bubble? What about that necklace? What's going to happen? I really want to see more
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 23:05 CST
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I must commend you on the originality you have displayed with this fic thus far. I struggle with my own so much to keep them away from played out subjects and it is difficult to do. I like the length of the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 22:47 CST
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Very interesting, I must admit you have my complete attention at this point in time. Your detail work and length of chapter are very well done and so far your idea is quite unique. It is so very difficult to come up with an idea that hasn't been thought of fifty million times. I haven't run across another fic that begins like this. I look forward to seeing what exactly you have planned out here. Awesome chapter, keep up the good work!
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