| "The Necklace" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 22:02 CST
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this is a good story so far, i cant wait to find out what happens next. please update soon.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to read what happens when all of the parts of Kagome gets back together and what happens with all the others involved.
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Reviewed By: kagsfan On: January 15, 2007 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love your story! i can't wait for an update. i wonder what hieis reaction to seeing kagome will be? will he apologize like he wanted to? i hope she gets paired with them all. PLEASE update. thank you.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 12:28 CST
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Wow! Awesome fic! It's been a long time since you've updated -- I hope you come back and write more! Hey! I don't mind if you pair her with ALL of them. She's so incredible -- love this power of splitting herself -- so unique. But, if you have to choose just one, I hope you end up with Hiei -- after all, he's loved her for 500 years, right? I think them coming together would be unbelievably intense. (And highly satifying!) Please continue this! I'll be looking for it!
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Reviewed By: jem89 On: November 03, 2006 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your story. I hope it's a Kag/Sess/Kuruma/Hiei/Youko pairing fic. Please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please. all the different scenese are confusing so i can't wait for another chapter to help explain. update! its great!
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 06:43 CDT
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Please do not stop updating your fic. It is quite good, and well written.
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 04:00 CDT
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You have a wonderful story and i look forward to reading future chapters. ^^
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Title: The Necklace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow i was confused there for a moment. i didn't know how you were going to explain kagomes situation. i love it so far, please update soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: starcrossed On: August 25, 2006 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bounces* Make it a Kag/ Sess/ Yoko/ Kurama/ Hiei! I'm such a hentai....btw...its a really good story so far. I wasn't expecting the whole Rin being that other girl's rencarnation, that really caught me off gaurd. Continue writting, because your writting is getting better and better each chapter.
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Title: WHOA!!!!
Reviewed By: Kiba_Girl1400(not signed in) On: August 25, 2006 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so confused for a second. I was like wait but Kagome was here so how can she be there. I made myself laugh at how stupid i really am. You have to continue this story i stayed up all night reading it so plaese update. LOL. I am still poundering who she will end up with. I LOVE Sesshoumaru, Youko Kurama, and Hiei so im like in this little favorite love triangle. Well Ja ne ^_^ ~PEAC~
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Angel_Rias [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. Please continue the story.
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Title: Want More
Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say I read all 6 chapters and you were right saying it would be confusing but now I fully understand the line up (so to speak.) Anyways, I love the story, poor Hiei what will he think when he see's Kagome again. What and When will her separates return to her. Will there be more action later on? Hope so, until later.... UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! SOON...... MTW. AKA Ookami K.
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read more so I hope you update as soon as you can, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 18:02 CDT
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um.... o..k That was confusing, yet I get it at the same time.... Oh well. I love it
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei(NLI) On: August 21, 2006 14:21 CDT
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My apologies if my prior review was offensive in some manner, that was not my intentions. Nor did I mean it to be taken that a four way pairing was impossible, just difficult. I'm sure that whatever direction you choose to take will turn out fine.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 12:10 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: ^^ awsome!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!! When are you gonna update again im dieing to know!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ^^ KAWAII!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I love it!!! You should make it a Yoko/Kurama and Kagome fic though im not fond of other pairings.... But anyways I really like this fic so far so UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tori ~ Chan On: July 19, 2006 19:06 CDT
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i like this story.... it's different. Allthought i will admit a few things don't quite add up. Maybe proof read chapters more to make sure everything flows evenly? Other then that awesome chapter and i look forward to u updating ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tori ~ Chan On: July 19, 2006 19:02 CDT
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i like this story.... it's different. Allthought i will admit a few things don't quite add up. Maybe proof read chapters more to make sure everything flows evenly? Other then that awesome chapter and i look forward to u updating ^_^
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Like the idea of Kurama/Sesshomaru/Youko/Hiei/Kagome pairing for this story. Update soon. Can't wait to see Hiei's reaction to Kagome being alive and what the others think of her transformation.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 17:42 CDT
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YAY X3 Let the fun begin^^
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter !! ^^ Great Prank on Yusuke, but I'm very curious to find out the cause and who this new girl is. As of now I also adore Kagomes new developing look. ^^ Please update soon, cant wait to read more. !!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: solqua unlogged On: May 10, 2006 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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very interesting story thus far, keep it up :)
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Reviewed By: Mukuro Meki On: May 08, 2006 18:35 CDT
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I like how the fic's comin' so far; and I do beleave that I like the idea of all of them getting a go at her
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 16:44 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: continue!
Reviewed By: lil rin On: May 07, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually get sick of stories where kagome turns into a demon, but yours has a reason behind it that is a lot more substantial than "her parents were demons and she's adopted" or "her father is some random demon lord". Please continue to write it.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 02:10 CDT
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Another good chapter, I love what Hiei did to Yusuke. I never knew he could be so vindictive with his jokes. As for the author's note about the pairings hmm.. You're free to take my advice or leave it, it's only worth two cents anyway. I'll always vote for Hiei/Kag or a triangle that involves those two. But... Threesomes are somewhat difficult to write, but by no means impossible. A square on the other hand is one hell of a headache. I started one and gave up on it, it was far too difficult to keep everyone in character considering how possessive some of the demons are. Not to mention keeping Kagome in character with the innocent/pure routine. Now with that said, if you could write it without it going ooc or making you want to pull your hair out I certainly wouldn't object. It's not my place to anyway lol I just hope that my advice helps some. It will most likely be a cold day in hell before I ever attempt another square. In addition to the ooc quandry, writing the lemons out without leaving someone neglected is enough to drive a person insane. LOL Update soon please.
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