| "The Necklace" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: May 04, 2006 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*big grin and starry eyes* I loved it! It was excellent as usual. Is Kagome the new shrine maiden at Genkai's temple. Well not the shrine maiden but the um...what's the word you used? Darn. Anyway it was excellent I wonder what that collar around Yusuke's neck does? And if Kagome recognizes it from/as Hiei's? Ooh and when she woke up, very good, detailed and realistic. Hm, So Youko's with Kagome, but where did Sesshoumaru go? It would be amusing if he met up with 'present' Sesshoumaru, now that would be a sticky situation, *grins*. I do love this story, I'd love to see Kurama (Youko)/Kagome, or Kur/Kag/Sess ^_^, It's up to you, I hope to see more from you soon, and Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: gcdv nli On: May 04, 2006 19:59 CDT
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u should update now....lmao
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 17:27 CDT
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P.s. GO H/K!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 17:26 CDT
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ooo, u know tu u should do....... ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' u should update now....lmao
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very original story line. I am really enjoying your style of writting. I usually know what's going to happen next in a story, but your story keeps me guessing and on the end of my seat, waiting to see what's next. Please update soon. As for constructive crticism, keep the reader on their toes. You should have kept Kagome's identy while training Hiei a secret. It makes the story more suspenseful and makes the read think.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 13:00 CDT
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LMAO This is an awesome story so far^^ Plz continue -^.^- Go HIEI X3
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Title: Lalala
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it and I think the pairing should be Hiei/Kurama/Sesshomaru/Kagome. Yeah! Update soon. Sooner than before.
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Reviewed By: dark crystal On: March 09, 2006 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the pairings are going to be kagome/hiei/kurama. And maybe sesshoumaru. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! Does hiei get to finally meet kagome again? What happens between Youko, Sesshoumaru, and Kagome? Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 17:57 CST
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I like the chapter. Alil confused but its all good. Plz write more soon!!!!! : )
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko(not logged in) On: February 17, 2006 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! XD I hope you update! Oh and I think that it should only be a Kurama/Kagome/Sesshoumaru fic cause I think that since Kagome met him when he was younger it would be kinda weird if He all of a sudden became her mate. I don't know but I usually enjoy Hiei/Kagome fics but it would totally not fit in with the concept of this already layed out fanfic. Besides I enjoy Youko and Kurama with Kagome more. But that is only my opinion but it would be delightful if you take it to account. Thanx oh and I added this fic to my favorites a while ago so I will keep up with the chapters. It is a wonderful beautiful fanfiction. Alright let me shut up and let you read what your other faithful reveiwers have to say. Ja ne!
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: inu_kags_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be honest with you, I love Hiei/Kagome fics. It's my favorite pairing and that alone if probably the biggest reason my muse has deserted me on my fics with other pairings. I think you did a wonderful job introducing him into the scheme of things. I can't help but wonder how long it will be until they are reunited and if Kagome looks at him a bit differently now he is grown. I anxiously look forward to reading more. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: February 13, 2006 12:50 CST
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great update. can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 23:30 CST
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I'll be honest with you, I love Hiei/Kagome fics. It's my favorite pairing and that alone if probably the biggest reason my muse has deserted me on my fics with other pairings. I think you did a wonderful job introducing him into the scheme of things. I can't help but wonder how long it will be until they are reunited and if Kagome looks at him a bit differently now he is grown. I anxiously look forward to reading more. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 12:53 CST
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I really really like this story! very intersting prdicament thats occuring. plz update soon!!!!!
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Title: The Necklace
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner *Offline* On: January 24, 2006 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cooool! Kagome's a demon! Nice! I want a Hiei/Kagome pairing! Update soooon!
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