| "The Necklace" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: ^^ KAWAII!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I love it!!! You should make it a Yoko/Kurama and Kagome fic though im not fond of other pairings.... But anyways I really like this fic so far so UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tori ~ Chan On: July 19, 2006 19:06 CDT
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i like this story.... it's different. Allthought i will admit a few things don't quite add up. Maybe proof read chapters more to make sure everything flows evenly? Other then that awesome chapter and i look forward to u updating ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tori ~ Chan On: July 19, 2006 19:02 CDT
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i like this story.... it's different. Allthought i will admit a few things don't quite add up. Maybe proof read chapters more to make sure everything flows evenly? Other then that awesome chapter and i look forward to u updating ^_^
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Like the idea of Kurama/Sesshomaru/Youko/Hiei/Kagome pairing for this story. Update soon. Can't wait to see Hiei's reaction to Kagome being alive and what the others think of her transformation.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 17:42 CDT
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YAY X3 Let the fun begin^^
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Reviewed By: YaY4AiR [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter !! ^^ Great Prank on Yusuke, but I'm very curious to find out the cause and who this new girl is. As of now I also adore Kagomes new developing look. ^^ Please update soon, cant wait to read more. !!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: solqua unlogged On: May 10, 2006 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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very interesting story thus far, keep it up :)
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Reviewed By: Mukuro Meki On: May 08, 2006 18:35 CDT
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I like how the fic's comin' so far; and I do beleave that I like the idea of all of them getting a go at her
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 16:44 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Title: continue!
Reviewed By: lil rin On: May 07, 2006 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually get sick of stories where kagome turns into a demon, but yours has a reason behind it that is a lot more substantial than "her parents were demons and she's adopted" or "her father is some random demon lord". Please continue to write it.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 02:10 CDT
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Another good chapter, I love what Hiei did to Yusuke. I never knew he could be so vindictive with his jokes. As for the author's note about the pairings hmm.. You're free to take my advice or leave it, it's only worth two cents anyway. I'll always vote for Hiei/Kag or a triangle that involves those two. But... Threesomes are somewhat difficult to write, but by no means impossible. A square on the other hand is one hell of a headache. I started one and gave up on it, it was far too difficult to keep everyone in character considering how possessive some of the demons are. Not to mention keeping Kagome in character with the innocent/pure routine. Now with that said, if you could write it without it going ooc or making you want to pull your hair out I certainly wouldn't object. It's not my place to anyway lol I just hope that my advice helps some. It will most likely be a cold day in hell before I ever attempt another square. In addition to the ooc quandry, writing the lemons out without leaving someone neglected is enough to drive a person insane. LOL Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: May 05, 2006 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit, SHorty! I'm all four that da pairin' it so sexy...*shudder* the sexyness. Kurama/Yoko/Kagome/Sesshomaru/Hiei! Update...Update it soon! Very Very Very SOON! *faints*
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Title: PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89*not logged in* On: May 05, 2006 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so excited!!! You finally updated!!! =^^= You MUST update!
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Reviewed By: TORYALE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next.. Please finish it soon!! I am just dieing to know well anyways awesome story....again!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Mrs cake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! Please continue! And also i hope it goes okay with your parents getting divorced. If it helps i think you have a great talent keep up the good work!
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