| "The Necklace" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: sugerT (not logged in) On: January 11, 2006 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. I love it so far. plot, setting. everything! very original, please update soon.
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Title: The Necklace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden (NOT LOGGED IN) On: January 08, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I really enjoy this story, can't wait to see the guys' reactions and Kagome's it's bound to be good. Keep up the good work! ~Kage
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Title: The Necklace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: qarry [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is unique. I love the plot and hope you update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens.
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Title: la
Reviewed By: loechick On: December 28, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i lev it it be great
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Reviewed By: Kit2Cat On: December 24, 2005 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I like your story. It's really good. Keep it up. And update soon. Bye
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 14:14 CST
Comment/Review:
ROFL I love it, though I do have to feel sorry for Souta. A few more hours and he might be doing one hell of a peepee dance inside that bubble lol I forsee a lot of turtle neck shirts for Kagome in the future, at least when she is in her own time. It would be rather difficult explaining why she has a pink jewel lodged in her skin. Not to mention her new tattoos lol Another good chapter, I like how this is coming together. Have a Merry Christmas! Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story a lot!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: moon-neko On: December 24, 2005 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good i think it will get better as more is added to the story so that meens update
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Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 06:03 CST
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Hey!! i was enjoying the story!! Did you REALLY had to do a cliffy?!?! Oh wellz, never mind. Plz update soon cause im really eager to read the next chappiez!! ^.^ Merry Christmas!~!~!
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Reviewed By: maranjade@yahoo.com On: December 23, 2005 06:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like it it's original. Are you going to have the necklace be a necklace or are you going to have the dragons actually attach to her skin? (Like jewelry glued on) Please update soon.
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Title: The Necklace
Reviewed By: mcowell529 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 19:54 CST
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I think that so far your story has a lot of potential. What happened to Souta? Is he still trapped in Kagome's bubble? What about that necklace? What's going to happen? I really want to see more
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 23:05 CST
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I must commend you on the originality you have displayed with this fic thus far. I struggle with my own so much to keep them away from played out subjects and it is difficult to do. I like the length of the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 22:47 CST
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Very interesting, I must admit you have my complete attention at this point in time. Your detail work and length of chapter are very well done and so far your idea is quite unique. It is so very difficult to come up with an idea that hasn't been thought of fifty million times. I haven't run across another fic that begins like this. I look forward to seeing what exactly you have planned out here. Awesome chapter, keep up the good work!
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