| "Something to Protect - Echoes" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: Prologue-Chapter 8
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 18:34 CST
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Wow, this story is truly unique, and I like the direction you're going with it so far. I loved how Inuyasha is sharing intimate moments with Kagome, whether he knows he is or not, and how he touches and holds her. He may be horrible with words but his actions are another story entirely. The new approach you've taken to Kagome's powers is interesting and I can't help but wonder how you'll resolve it. I just hope they finally get passed all the things that are holding them back, eventually. ;) I also wonder what purpose Shiori has but it seems she's getting friendly with Rin. How Sesshomaru reacts will be another story I'm sure, not to mention Jaken. As for Shippou, I think Kagome needs to open her eyes to her true feelings for the kit, she treats him more like a son than her little brother. That scene where he mumbled her name as she cradled him to her bosom was truly heartwarming. Let's hope for more of those moments in the future, with Inuyasha. ;) hehe I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
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Title: More soon, please!
Reviewed By: Nekomata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great take on the InuYasha/Kagome romance. Just enough angst to keep it believable, without being utterly repetitive and depresing (as so many are). Marvelous description, I almost felt like I was flying through the forest with them in this last chapter. Of course whatever Naraku's plotting can't be good.... Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:10 CST
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This chapter had some lovely imagery, particularly the 'king-of-the-world' scene. I also liked Kagome's internal monologue about Inuyasha's feelings. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_luvs_kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I am a definite Inu/Kag shipper! Hooray for the cutest couple ever! Not many people add Shiori in their stories, I like it ^_^ perhaps you can break the made-up cycle and pair Souten with Shippo? Only a suggestion, Personally I cant remember a story with Soutwn in it, and I'm on a lot. Well sayonara!
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Reviewed By: ganzil On: December 04, 2006 21:38 CST
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I am really enjoying reading this fic. It is well written, and the storyline is interesting. I can't wait to see how the prologue ties in to the rest of the story. You are also doing a good job with the Inu/Kag romance. Keep up the good work! (And thanks for sharing it with us.)
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 18:18 CST
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YAY! I'm so happy that you decided to keep this story going! You know, this was the first fic that I added to my favorites cause I didn't want to miss it on the off chance that you'd write some more--and here you did! You are an excellent writer and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: rach (aka pokiepal) On: November 30, 2006 10:47 CST
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Good to see an update! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:29 CST
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You've really got my attention, can't wait to see how this pan's out. I think they should kiss at least in the next hmm, well can't hurt to ask. See ya next read
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Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good chapter. I had to go back to read the whole thing as I'd forgotten what had happened before, but I loved what I read. I'm very interested in the sword that Sango has for Kagome, I almost think it might have been Midoriko's sword. And the voice in her dreams, obviously there is something more to it than the obvious. I can't wait to find out how it all comes together. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 21:22 CST
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thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
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Reviewed By: BabyChibi1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(gasping for air) No! I.....need......MORE! Good read. Love your writing style! I can totally understand getting your ass kicked. Hope you can update again soon! So, yeah. MORE PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 16:15 CDT
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i love it up date soon please. it flows nicely from scene to scene and chapter to chapter. nice fic that might rivel sueric's some day^_^.
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Reviewed By: crc31789@hotmail.com On: August 23, 2006 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very impressed with this story. It's a bit different from the other things I've been reading and I like the way that Kagome and Inuyasha are relating to each other. Even Miroku and Sango have caught my attention. I like your writing style a lot. It actually reminds me more of Rumiko's style--that's a good thing! Anyway, I like the way that you write so much that I'm going to see if you have any other fanfictions I might like. I'm sorry to hear that life has been such a pain for you lately, but very glad to hear that you might start updating again soon. Hopefully that will be the case. :)
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: August 22, 2006 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to stop and say how much I love that scene you wrote where he saved her from the snake youkai. There was a lot of suspense until he did, and then he wrapped her up and she caught his concerned eyes. It was really... well, not nice under the circumstances, but I loved the scene a lot. There's not a lot of description to this story, and it's a quick read. But I really like it none the less. Being able to move through a well-written story quickly (I like your understanding of the characters and the plot) is good. Who's the girl at the end? Guess I'll find out...
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Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! another chapter! i love this story. it's amazing. I can't wait for your next chapter!
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