| "Something to Protect - Echoes" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! YES! the saga continues! As well as the humor, lol. I still love your characterizations and humor. I find them rather refreshing, and very entertaining, and the store scene was awesome, lol. Till next install, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: January 13, 2008 23:27 CST
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If I wasn't in the middle of something else I'd give you the best review I could, because you deserve it for writing such an awesome chapter, and for finally updating! But I'm just going to keep it short. You do the best grocery-store scenes, lol. I anticipated the magazine turning out to be either swimsuits or a playboy mag. xDD But my favorite part of the scene was when he found her body wash and was smelling her. Talk about make a girl's heart race with that!!! And that's all I'm gonna say for now. Please continue to update!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 22:51 CST
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Yay, it's back! This chapter had me rolling. IY loose in a grocery store. (or worse yet, a walmart/target) The potential for amusement there is endless! Glad to see he kept his word, and that he and K are getting along so well. Hmmm, the sniffing scene makes me wonder how long it'll be before these two have to break down and really talk. Can't wait to find out!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2007 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story. I do hope Inuyasha and Kagome decide to get together since it slowly seems to be heading that way. Hopefully Inuyasha can catch whoever is breaking into Kagome's house too. Please update soon.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I too, say you revising some and was hoping you'd pick this back up. It a great read with wonderful characterizations... and humor, lol. I especially loved Inu audacious attack on Kagome's alarm. Hehe. So until the next install, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 00:05 CST
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Hi Angelswrath, Saw you were revising, and wanted you to know that I really, really hope you pick this up again! I've missed it, you really nailed the characterization down, and it's a wonderful read. Please continue....
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good so far! Do you intend to continue?
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 05:48 CDT
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You have got to come back and finish this, the suspense is killing me! Come back, come back!
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good. I hope you keep updating.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT story. Your characterization is wonderful, particularly Inuyasha. He's such an adorable contradiction here, funny yet serious, blunt to the point of being brutal yet heartbreakingly vulnerable to harsh words himself. I can't wait to read more of this story. Your award nomination is well-deserved.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 00:22 CDT
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Love this story. Chapter seven left me grinning, you wrote it so well, I could feel the wind, and the exhileration. You handle the relationship b/t K and I very well, balancing the tension with wonderful fluff. Hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Tree-lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 22:23 CDT
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I love this story!!! It's just great! I've had it as one of my favorites forever and I'm just so glad you updated...Oh, and I don't know if you noticed or not, but you do have a few grammar mistakes in the last chapter, like words that run together likethis, (i know i do that when i type too fast)But just so you know, I think you are an incredible writer and I wish i could write this well
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 03:56 CDT
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First off, I wanted to let you know about Reviewer replies. For people liek myself with blue names in their review, due to a hyperlink, you can click on our names and be taken to our profiles where our e-mail addresses should be listed. As for a specific way that's part of the MM.org system, I'm sure there is one, but I haven't used it before. Now, onto the actual review, I loved this chapter! Inuyasha falling asleep on Kagome's pillow and using Kagome's blanket was just adorable besides the fact that he passed out within seconds. I was hoping you'd go into his thoughts about hwo and why it happened, and maybe have him revel in her scent but perhaps that's for the future, hehe. Inuyasha is adorable and there's definite chemistry there between Kagome and him. It looks like it'll have to wait since it seems an attack is underway near Sango's village. I'm still kind of wondering how Miroku in the prologue fits in with the rest of the story, not to mention the mysterious voice that Kagome heard telling her she wasn't ready. There's definitely a few mysteries to look forward to unravelling in the future, not the least of which is Sango's mother's sword. I know you didn't bring that up for nothing, especially since it's 'borrowed.' I'll be looking forward to your next chapter so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I liked your story a lot :o) I am def. adding it to my faves. The characters are well-developed, and I like the story line so far. Great job! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: crc31789 On: March 07, 2007 18:32 CST
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WOOT! You updated. I had to refresh my memory about this story, but now I've got it and I'm good. I loved this chatper! It was awesome! First with Kagome's confusion and then with Sango and Miroku. I really liked Sango and Miroku in this chapter. Now I have to sleep before I pass out. >>'
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