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Title: Buildup of Sexual Tension
Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil (NSI) On: February 27, 2006 16:31 CST
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Yay! this is a kickass fic, and I know that authors like reviews as presents, so happy early/late or creepily on time birthday! Now for the review! I like how you portrayed Inuyasha. Thanks for not making him shallow. I love how this is a Kagura/Sesshomaru fiction instead of a Rin one. Thats just too reminiscent of pedophilia (no idea how to spell that). I also like how you didnt rush them into relationships, because as everyone knows the build-up of sexual tension is soooo fun!
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Title: You are So Very Talented!
Reviewed By: Silver-and-Cold On: February 09, 2006 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was a rating higher than 10 I would give it to you, because this story is by FAR the BEST Sess/Kagura AU I've ever read. You truly capture Sesshomarus inner turmoil and lust, when most authors either make him to cold, or just refuse to write his POV in general because its to difficult to remain in character. So the mere fact that you have overcome that struggle offsets you from the get-go as an amazing writer, but add the fact that you able to creat a smoothly flowing story that makes the reader want more and more each time and BAM! Your a fanfic superstar! I hope this has stoked your ego, because it should be very high! :) I cant wait to see the next chapter, I'm sure it will be equally amazing as the rest, if not better! --A Humble Reader--
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: OrangesMcBob On: February 09, 2006 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing! Please Update soon!
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Reviewed By: harpersong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story this morning and flew through it. I love it. The way you write Kagura is eerily like the way I think...I think that is what drew me initially. One thing I notice is that I love when writer's come up with unique nicknames or pet names that add depth and you scored there as well. You actually had me laughing out loud a few times. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. =)
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Title: Strangely Coincidental
Reviewed By: Mye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thouroughly enjoing this story. I just think it's creepy that I have so many things in common with it. I have a dark red beta named Sushi Dao (Dao is Chinese for sword), my nickname for my niece is Monkey, I have a freckle just below my right breast, my best friend thinks I'm cynical as hell... And the list goes on. In any case, this story is nothing short of delectable. As the way of reviews normally go; please update soon yada yada yada. I will be looking in on your other Kag/Sess "Pride and Predjudice". Look for my reviews there soon. ~Orrik
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Title: One of the Few Interesting Fics I Have Encountered As of Yet!
Reviewed By: takema_kyoko On: February 05, 2006 04:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! It is romantic, hilarious, and seductive all at the same time. I enjoy the way you made Sessh refer to Rin as 'his little monkey', I thought that was down-right adorable. And putting the story in first person of the two main characters little-by-little in each chapter made it even more interesting. And the fact that you made Sessh a Sinatra fan is even more interesting because it suits his character well. And the fact that you knew the lyrics to some of his best works and used them in the fic made me enjoy reading it even more. I also liked the fact that you knew the 'Sun Song', my daughter overly-adores that song, and now I know the lyrics enough to sing it to her when she feels down. For some reason, that song always lifts her spirits. Anyways, I am looking forward to the next chapters to come. . .and I hope they are just as well written as the first. Thank you for giving me something interesting to read, now I am finding it rather difficult to become bored. ^_^
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Title: Lovely!
Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiLurve On: February 04, 2006 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story! An amazing blend of lust, intrigue, and Frank ^__^! The use of "witchcraft" for the dancing between Sess and Kagura it was priceless! :D
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: fudge On: February 02, 2006 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's incredible how good this story is....keep up the amazing work!
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Reviewed By: mrs.sesshy aka Kagura-ness On: January 17, 2006 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my bloody gods! I love your fic! And I am most DEFINATELY looking foward to more and more upfates from you! You have now been officially reviewed and bookmarked! Kagura-ness! a.k.a. mrs.sesshy. P.S. WOOT! WOOT! DIDS I SAY I LOVED IT AND I WANT YOU TO WRITE MORE! WELL NOW I AM SAYING EXACTLY THAT! I LOVE YOUR FIC AND I ORDER/COMMAND/ASK YOU TO WRITE MORE! /Reviewed and Bookmarked by Kagura-ness./
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Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14(not loged in) On: January 17, 2006 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't like p.o.v. fanfics with 'I' but this is a great story and i love it! great job all the way!
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: HimeG [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every chapter of this story has made me laugh til I cried. I really love the way you present Kagura.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 18:52 CST
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Really enjoying this. Am wondering who has murdered the nanny. Also, was the thing about Nancy Drew and sharp coroners a pun or a typo?
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 13:57 CST
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Lol, I liked this chapter a lot. And I really love Rin, update soon
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 16:41 CST
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Hey, I like your story a lot, and it's pretty funny to. It's a shame you don't have more reviews. Update soon, I can't wait to read about how Sess starts to seudce Kagura, and please don't send Rin away!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say, Im addicted to whatever it is you write. And this piece is no different. I love it. Keep it up.
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