"When its all over." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: xchibi_ahouX On: December 28, 2005 17:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this story rocks! SO DO PLEASE UPDATE!!! you spelled tough wrong by the way you spelt it 'tuff'. lol its okay we all make mistakes. how cute!!! ^-^ I love how you got inuyasha to be weak. your so right he has always been the strong type. +_+.. but thats okay. UPDATE ASAP!!!
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Title: None Reviewed By: Saddina On: December 23, 2005 23:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoy how this is going so far. Tho you could put a little more of Miroku and Sango in the chapter's they seem like there getting the small straw lately ^.^ Saddy Aka Silver Broken Rose
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Reviewed By: some one i know someone you should know On: December 23, 2005 15:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it
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