| "Clichéd Story" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: 23kags23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more this is a really great story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 19:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story I hope you update soon
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Rin^^ On: February 26, 2006 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as usual. love the changed style, are you going to edit WPP now? Cuz I love it, but it makes me dizzy reading. You did a great job of keeping inuyasha in Character, a rarity these days. >
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 21:35 CST
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This story is funny. Inuyasha knows it wrong to use children like that. Poor Kagome! It just not her day.
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Title: Good, but could use some work.
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I have to say I like the idea behind your story. It's a nice different take on the InuxKag relationship. However, your grammar needs a lot of work in many places. Your spelling could use some work as well. There are many errors throughout the story and I suggest you edit it. The writing style you use seems a little choppy and events just don't seem to flow thought to thought. I can still pick out what you're trying to say and what points you are trying to get across but it just isn't as fluid as it should be. Overall I like the basic plot you have but your style, spelling and grammar could use improvement. Keep up the good work and I hope to see improvements in the future. ^^
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story its totally awesome. please keep writing and update soon please
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Title: write more
Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: January 04, 2006 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't stop it was getting good!
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Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that it was pretty good
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Reviewed By: berry On: December 29, 2005 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
i like u idea with the whole cliched story i hope u update soon. it would b really cool 2 c what's going to happen next ^.^ =D cant wait =D
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