| "The Pack of the West" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Hieis_koi14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an interesting story line, but i like it, the end was a little short lived though, however the story was great.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 09:09 CDT
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my poor sesshy-kun was so worried!! anyway i loved it is it the end? lol if its not be sure to update looooved it
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Reviewed By: popopopo'''' On: April 06, 2006 11:19 CDT
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WOO! Gr8 story! omg plz say there is a sequle or another chappie!!! Yay!
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Reviewed By: not telling On: March 28, 2006 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I LOVED it! I gonna have to read more of your fics! ^___^Font Color
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Title: pyropixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 00:36 CST
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Oh no it ended! Well it was good well it lasted. Look forward to your next story ^___^
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 Not Loged In On: January 18, 2006 23:03 CST
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I really like how it ended I was worried about rin but some part of me knew she would be alright. So can you tell me some of what Love's Lessons is going to be about?
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 (not loged in) On: January 10, 2006 20:38 CST
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Now that was hot. can't wait to find out what you have instore for the next chapter so keep up the awesome work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mysteriously Moi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I like your story. I don't remember if you have other stories or not, but it looks as if you have some experience in writing. This story is really good. I enjoyed it alot. I notice spelling and grammer mistakes in every story, but you did really good. Alot better then some stories I've read in the past. Hm. That didn't sound nice, did it? Anywho, I like the story, you're a good writer, and I spent three days reading this story, so get your butt in gear and update. Hasta la vista, bebe.
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII!!!(CUTE) I love this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 (not loged in) On: January 01, 2006 23:04 CST
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OMG I can't believe that you made sesshomaru laugh, well I can't really say that I could never see him doing it because even I have made him laugh well i think I have ...anyways I love how the stories going and can't wait to find out what you make all of them do next. so keep it up.
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 19:46 CST
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Another great chapter. I would have to say you are my fav. right now you are the only person that updates everyday. :p that makes me happy in pants. ^_^
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 16:54 CST
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I liked the part when miroku grabbed sesshomarus ass. I bet he was think after sesshomaru grabbed his that that has never happened before he got slaped for somthing like that. well anyways keep up the great work. >_
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 01:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that is so sweet and sad at the same time well I can' t wait to read what happens next. keep up the awesome work. ^.^
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 16:55 CST
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I really enjoyed reading this, it was very origional. Keep up the good work ^___^
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: December 26, 2005 17:52 CST
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very, very good. an original concept, and well written. only one note - sesshomaru has a CRESCENT moon on his forehead, not a quarter moon. continue soon, please!
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