| "Black Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 23:26 CST
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this is a great story, i hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: KagomeoftheSouth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
put kagome and hiei together they make a perfect couple if u ask me.
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 23:17 CDT
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I love your story soo much and is ther any way to add a made up character from me.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki-(not logged on) On: May 20, 2006 20:03 CDT
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I think you cheated with all the spacing to make it look like you wrote more¬¬ Oh well, least you updateed^^ plz continue=)
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Reviewed By: nightangel15notloggedin On: May 20, 2006 15:38 CDT
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yea!!!!! you updated!!!!!!!!! nice chapter. i cant wait for training, and kurama and mya talk!!!!!! i love this fic!!!!!!!!! i am on a caffiene high!!!!!!!!!!! looking forward to next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: please
Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: March 26, 2006 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! ohh, ohh, (jumping up and down while typing) if hiei is single, can he be paired up w/one of my characters? please? with lots and lots of sugar on top? Name: Amber age 18 ht: 5'5" wt: 105lbs Race: shadow demon Descriptoin: saphire blue eyes that turn midnight blue when she is angry. long navy blue hair with an amber colored streak in it (hence her name). wears a short light pink colored dress with spaghetti straps over navy blue jeans with a silver belt around the waist, and knee high leather boots. angered very easily, and really REALLY hates guys with big attitudes and egos. Weapons:a silver staff which can conjur up shadow monsters, and a poisen dagger, just in case... Abilities: can melt into the shadows, can control shadow monsters and other night beings, black belt, and knows hand to hand combat.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 18:29 CST
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Oooo^^ Update plz.
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Reviewed By: HieiKuramaluver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update hi its me you know um kiharu-kurama caitlin well yeah anyway update it right this instint
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 18:52 CST
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Cool^^ PLZ update... and add some comedy.
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Title: love it!!!!!
Reviewed By: hackneyqueenextreme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story a lot. I can't wait for an update. This is one of my favorite fan fics. You must continue soon. If you don't mind I would like to put in a character. Name: Emiko Desdemonu (blessed by the devil) age: she looks 16 but is a demon has red-orange kind of blond hair that looks like fire with deep green eyes. She always wears black. Just looking at her you see hat she is not one to be taken lightly. She has a major don't-mess-with-me attitude. Though lots of guys say she is hot, she never really notices. Oh, you can't read her mind because everything is in computer codes so is incomprehensible. -tabs-
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Title: keep going
Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pweeez make it a sesshomaru and kagome and i just love the story so pweez continue thanx
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 18:57 CST
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Kag & Sessy XD It's gotta be!!!! PLZ update. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLLLLLLLLZZZZ *puppt eyes* I'll give you a cookie^^ *hand you a freshly baked chocolate chip cookie*
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Title: Black Rose
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome or Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: February 08, 2006 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this just keeps getting better and better. a nice little sesshy/kagome pairing sounds like fun, i have never been a great fan of inuyasha because he treats kagome like crap. let the clay pot have him (kikyo). if you want a new character, the name would be Rai, which means trust. she would be about 17 yrs old. she would be 5'8' and slim. have black hair with one red streak through her bangs, and sky blue eyes. her aura screams out mess with me and die a horrible death. i will let you decide what race (demon or human). so there you go! cant wait til you update!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 01:26 CST
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-.- um i'd have to say this is pretty ooc ( though i've onlt read ch.1) and Hiei is um spelt like that not hieh btw, other wise.. * continues reading*
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Title: angeltsuki
Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 being the highest^^ It's awesome plz update asap XD
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: January 27, 2006 18:22 CST
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i'm glad to see you're still working on this story...i have known other authors to just let a story sit for a month, then say they couldnt finish it. ch 5 was pretty cool. a kur/mya/hiei pairing sounds wonderful. keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: nightangel15 not logged in On: December 24, 2005 22:16 CST
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i actually put this on my favorites list...i really like your story, and i cannot wait until you update.
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Reviewed By: lilcar12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 06:32 CST
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hey how bout u be very kind and tell me who black rose is?? cause im dying to no!~!~! Its just not fair!! well plz update soon cause cant wait to read the next chappie!~! MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!
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