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| "Unworthy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Kawaii!
Reviewed By: DawnLove [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I disagree with the other review. Too many fanfics like to make Akane out like JUST a violent, angry character. She can be, but that's not all there is to her. Just as Ranma isn't nearly as dense as he come across in a lot of fanfics. You've written all the main players in your story with depth and complexity. I personally like your ending. It was true to the characters.
| Reviewed By: A Reader On: January 27, 2006 08:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Meh, First chap was good. Didn't like the second chap at all. It's too much "Saint Akane" for my taste.
| Title: Testing
Reviewed By: CrazyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Testing, testing...want to see if this'll post. I haven't gotten a *single* bloody review on *two* different stories here, yet on ff.net I'm getting oodles on them both! Aaagh!
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