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Reviewed By: JJJODOLL***** On: February 17, 2006 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you story is the best i have read in a long time hope you finish it soon.
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Reviewed By: charmEr*** On: February 15, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: naughtygrl
Reviewed By: AWWW On: February 15, 2006 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter but I still don't get the pairing maybe that will come in the future. Excellent writing! Please write more!
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:57 CST
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so... she's gonna have three mates? Hm... Im definitly not against the idea... I mean Naraku has become pretty concerned for her well being... & then there's Sesshomaru, who is now speaking sweetly about her & then of course theres Inuyasha. Now you need to get rid of Kikyo & Jaken's attitude toward kagome. Lots of Luv & Happy V-Day ^-^ UPDATE SOON
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: January 16, 2006 09:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Cant wait to see whatll happen :D Please update soon!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is unexpected and new to me! I can't figure out what will happen next but i guess i will soon find out!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 00:12 CST
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Really like the story. Cant wait to see what the pairing will be. Update soon Please! :D
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