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Title: Note from Author
Reviewed By: mirokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 21:00 CDT
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I am no Longer posting this story, I rarely get on this site and I have to redo ALL of each story i have posted, if you want more than please contact me Via my Email
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so when I first started to read this fic, I was all WTF?! but I know understand it more and I'm still really really confused about the whole pairing thing.........I personally want Sesshomaru to get Kagome, and Inuyasha to pay a price of some sort and Naraku to just die o.o is that so wrong? but I love the story and the only thing I would change is the html you use, colors are fine, but when you have it centered or right alined it gets on my little nerves, but I can still read it........it's just sorta hard for me too. But you've been really good about a left justified one and I like that^^ Keep up the AMAZEING WORK!!!!!!!! -Jenn, Kagome360
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Title: think about rewriting
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 01:56 CST
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I noticed in the beginning it was not only hard to follow, but it made me lose interest. but then the more I read, the more growth I saw in you the writer. I strongly suggest you rewrite the first three chapters, because I do agree with the other reviewer to some extent. I however read more and thought it was some what entertaining.
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Title: are you guys serious
Reviewed By: ???????? On: February 05, 2007 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
what! are all you guys reviewing 10 year olds? I only read the first chapter, and beleive me it was tourture. this story is horrible. and the grammer makes it even worse. you need to know the difference between a singular and plural. wait three years and then you can write a story. and tell your friends to tell you the truth.
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 13:22 CST
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about time! we have been waiting for an update! good chapter hopefully the next one will come out sooner! jk! well, somewhat! happy writings!
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Title: write more!!
Reviewed By: DAZ306 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Add soon. I really want to know.
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Title: Um ok
Reviewed By: DAZ306 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um ok sooo this is crazy but nice is a good way. So Fluffy like Kagome and Inuyasha is a dumbass.
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow but what are the pairings, i'm a little confused or are you leaving that for the end. well anyway good story.
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Reviewed By: kuro-inu-hanyou On: July 26, 2006 00:38 CDT
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I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! all the twists are so much fun. poor kagome ne? anyway please writed more i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Kyo-Chan-Lover On: April 18, 2006 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic. It has alot of details, and it is explained very clearly. Please update soon! HEHEHE!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story I hope you will update soon
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Reviewed By: The Devil Trite On: April 16, 2006 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm really glad I found this story, a nice change then some of the standard Inu stories out there. Btw, you might try adding a description so that others will be more likely to click on it, cause you definitly deserve it.
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: March 06, 2006 21:29 CST
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Doesnt it mean that shes mated to both of them. I honestly think thats a really good idea. I mean if they can learn to share. Since Sessh & her have feelings toward one another, but everyone knows Kagome would never be able to completly get over Inu & vise versa... It just seems to work. Especially with the large number of children. Adopted or otherwise... Rin, Shippo, Kanaye, the new pup... itd be cute if it were twins... one girl, one boy. But thats just me ^-^ LOVE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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