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Reviewed By: Kyo-Chan-Lover On: April 18, 2006 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic. It has alot of details, and it is explained very clearly. Please update soon! HEHEHE!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 17:29 CDT
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I love this story I hope you will update soon
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Reviewed By: The Devil Trite On: April 16, 2006 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm really glad I found this story, a nice change then some of the standard Inu stories out there. Btw, you might try adding a description so that others will be more likely to click on it, cause you definitly deserve it.
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: March 06, 2006 21:29 CST
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Doesnt it mean that shes mated to both of them. I honestly think thats a really good idea. I mean if they can learn to share. Since Sessh & her have feelings toward one another, but everyone knows Kagome would never be able to completly get over Inu & vise versa... It just seems to work. Especially with the large number of children. Adopted or otherwise... Rin, Shippo, Kanaye, the new pup... itd be cute if it were twins... one girl, one boy. But thats just me ^-^ LOVE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: JJJODOLL***** On: February 17, 2006 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you story is the best i have read in a long time hope you finish it soon.
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Reviewed By: charmEr*** On: February 15, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: naughtygrl
Reviewed By: AWWW On: February 15, 2006 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter but I still don't get the pairing maybe that will come in the future. Excellent writing! Please write more!
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 21:57 CST
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so... she's gonna have three mates? Hm... Im definitly not against the idea... I mean Naraku has become pretty concerned for her well being... & then there's Sesshomaru, who is now speaking sweetly about her & then of course theres Inuyasha. Now you need to get rid of Kikyo & Jaken's attitude toward kagome. Lots of Luv & Happy V-Day ^-^ UPDATE SOON
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Title: Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (nli) On: January 16, 2006 09:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Cant wait to see whatll happen :D Please update soon!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is unexpected and new to me! I can't figure out what will happen next but i guess i will soon find out!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 00:12 CST
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Really like the story. Cant wait to see what the pairing will be. Update soon Please! :D
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