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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru'sPriestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2011 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That ended really nice....but I don't know if I could have forgiven him for what he did. I mean...maybe friends but never lovers again. |
Reviewed By: tanitoku On: March 19, 2011 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
why does iy always get what he wants and kagome always weak and pathetic enough to put her self aside all the DAMN TIME ? womens empowerment people ! just dump him please... |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 14:33 EDT
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this made me cry. very emotionally moving piece --wonderful story. ♥;
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Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2009 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWW THIS WAS SAD AT FIRST BUT THEN IT GOT ALL LOVEY DOVEY LOLZ........NICE ONE-SHOT!!!!!
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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 20:34 EST
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! dat is so cute and romantic! i wuv it keep it up! write anader one!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 21:09 EST
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That was so beautiful. *sob* *sob* It really was a seemingly fragile but surprisingly strong bond of Kagome's and Inuyasha's love for each other, portrayed with angst and revenge and passion all combined together in a sad and poignant balance all thanks to you. The emotions were wonderfully portrayed and your style was wonderfully added to Rumiko Takahashi's. Great Job! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 00:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is only a one-shot, pouts I was hoping for more. This was very well written and thought out. Beautiful work indeed. Until next time, Chanda
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Reviewed By: xxanime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 13:03 EST
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Oh man, yeah you made me cry!! There aren't that many fanfics that can do that to me.
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Reviewed By: H. On: October 14, 2007 09:23 EDT
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What a tearjerker! Wonderful one shot, to say the least. The amount of emotion and detail of the depth of hurt between the two is quite heart breaking.
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Title: Plagiarism
Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 14:47 EDT
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princess liz, I went and looked on ff.net and couldn't find an author under that name. Hopefully that means that they have been deleted already. What was the name the story was under? Thank you for leaving the message for me. Akihana
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Title: plagerism
Reviewed By: princess liz On: July 17, 2007 21:25 EDT
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I thought you might like to know that your story "Learning to Trust" is being plagerised on fanfiction.net. The person's name is chocolatechick101. She has changed the title and claimed it as her own. You're not the first she has done this to. Every story on her profile is stolen. I hope you can get in touch with the webmasters, and reclaim your work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 19:16 EDT
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i like your story... very interesting... too bad it's only a one shot... hope you make more stories...
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Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 23:56 EDT
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wonderfully written. great work!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 23:35 EDT
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BAKA INU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sniff*... although it took them ages, I'm glad they finally got their happily ever after.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 23:34 EDT
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wonderful. yes, i cried, but i smiled too. you went through the passage of time with both of them, had them (but focused on kagome) asking themselves important questions about themselves as much as what they felt for each other. it wasn't rushed. no immediate happy ending, but healing, mending
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: suffering/kagome On: March 23, 2007 22:25 EDT
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i love it im crying trying to stop before peeps come in this room
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 20:08 EDT
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This is a really sweet beginning to this story. Still where are you taking it, where does it go? These questions are the important ones. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 17:32 EST
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you should make this a story instread of just a one shot. it is sooooooo good i loved it a lot.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you cease to amaze me with your great skills at writing ^ ^ Keep it up
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Title: That was a great story
Reviewed By: Ramenluver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your story was sooo good!I loved how I felt like I was there. I could really get a great picture in my mind of what was happening. You defenetly show alot of talent. hope you continue writing Inuyasha storys!!! thank you for a great story.
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Reviewed By: cougiecat12 On: May 26, 2006 16:57 EDT
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excellent story! I love how you developed the relationship and didn't have Kagome forgive and forget as soon as she saw him. It's so easy to do, but then the guy thinks he can get away with it again.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good. A different take on Inu and Kags relationship...or lack there of at one point here. I love the angst but also love happy endings more. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: April 05, 2006 16:40 EDT
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aww... isn't it weird when two people live together and one is longing after the other...? oh the sexual tension. nice job. very entertaining.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: January 24, 2006 01:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i almost started crying XD once again, it would be great if you continued this story too! or a nice part 2 atleast =P
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Title: Abandonment
Reviewed By: Kichi_dragon(not logged in) On: January 10, 2006 21:08 EST
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I give you two thumbs up! this story is so bittersweet, who cant help but fall in love with it? exelent job!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 10, 2006 19:44 EST
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How sadly sweet. Very well written too. *applause*
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Title: Well done
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 13:38 EST
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Tear jerking. Excellent closure
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Princess_Mimi18 On: January 09, 2006 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't believe you've only gotten six reviews. This fanfiction was absolutely beautiful. I love it.
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Title: Tear jerker
Reviewed By: mermaid232 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 01:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another story wonderfully completed! Brava!
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Title: *Sniff-Sniff* ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 06:30 EST
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They just get better! You write these two so well! This story had a certain amount of maturity about them that some of your others didn't, maybe because it was a continuation, and I liked that. It was easy to see and very believable. I truly enjoyed this one! ~NekuYasha ^_^
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