| "My Cousin, Toboe" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Final Angelic Reqium On: May 06, 2007 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I stumbled across this story and decided to read it. I must say, I had a hard time stopping, I found it well written, gripping and completely enjoyable. There were a couple minor (VERY MINOR) spelling errors/typos away from perfect, but as they were so few and far between, I don't see a need to hold it against you. I liked the logic in the story, and you made each of the characters believable (I've never seen Wolf's Rain, so it was kinda like a totally Original Story) and I loved the way the story seemed to flow. The only real thing that bothered me was the lack of Tsume and Kiba air time at the end. It felt like it was unfinished, if only slightly. Keep writing, you're amazing. Now, I think I'll go read a few more of your stories.
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Title: ^_^ *speechless*
Reviewed By: Kana Rumiko On: September 19, 2006 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!!! that was really, really, really, really, HOTT!!!! I loved it!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! i spent the whole day reading your work!!!! Keep it up girl!! (talk about hott) Sincerely, Kanna
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Title: Evil little man
Reviewed By: BonC On: September 03, 2006 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it just me or does Toboe get eviler every chapter? I couldn't beleive he said that! Aside from that...the Hige/Kiba scene was awesome! I loved it. But doesn't Kiba feel the least bit guilty about it, I mean technically, he is cheating on his boyfriend. ^_~ I wonder how Tsume's gonna feel when he gets back. Heard you were making more WR fics? YAHOOOOO! You always have good stuff. Can't wait for the next chap!
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Title: Yay! More Hige!
Reviewed By: BonC On: August 10, 2006 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter again. Toboe is such a brat! I can't believe he would spoil Kiba's fun like that, but when your jealous, it's hard to see anything but green. And Hige action....fantastic! I love his character here, so smooth and charming, just as he should be. Can't wait for the next chapter. Sounds like it's gonna be a hot one! ^__~
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Title: Mr.
Reviewed By: Yaoi Fanfiction Fan On: July 31, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love the story so PLEASE continue writing and updating cause if you dont...I WILL GO INSANE!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!AND THEN YOU LEAVE IT AT A CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!OOOOOOOOOOH THAT JUST MAKES ME VERY VERY SAD AND ANGRY!!!!!!!!!YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE TO UPDATE SO I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS BY THE WAY TOBOES MOM IS STARTING TO IRRITATE ME VERY BAD. COME ON AT LEAST PUT UP ONE MORE CHAPTER(I WOULD HOPE THAT YOU PUT MORE THEN THAT UP) YOU SEE I COME HERE EVERY DAY TO SEE IF YOU UPDATED AND YOU HAVEN'T!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA CRY!!! acually no way am I going to cry. it's just not a manly thing to do so....UPDATE so I can get another hardon please! (0.0)
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Reviewed By: Saffell On: July 28, 2006 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an AMAZING talent for writing so....PLEASE continue writing! I have to know what happens next. Please Update for all of your adoring fans! This is one of my favorites and all of my favorite Wolf's Rain Fanfiction YOU write so please don't let me down and continue to post the story. it's just so hot^o^Thanks!
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Title: Death by cliffhanger...
Reviewed By: BonC On: July 24, 2006 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aack! How could you! You love to torture me don't you Fan, I can see the evil little twinkle in your eye. ^_~ That was another great chapter. Good to see Hige get a little screen time too. I love his character, you capture all of his little quirks perfectly. The bath scene was getting so steamy! I was like yes .... the finger o_O ... and then O_O .... Cher just kills it all -_-. Guess I'll just have to sit tight until next chapter.
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Title: Jealous...ay?
Reviewed By: BonC On: July 11, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You never disppoint me Fan, great work as always! OMG can the scenes get any hotter? This last installment blew my mind! Did you know there's something weird going on with the chapters and updates showing in the main menu. I wouldn't have known you updated if I hadn't been fooling with the fic. Anyways, I can't wait for the next installment. IT seems Toboe is getting a little too attached and jealous. This might boil over in the end. Till next time ^______^ ^__^
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Title: WOOT!!!
Reviewed By: Light_Dark_dragon On: July 01, 2006 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so nice to have you update again. It took forever though, but you do keep us on the edge of our seats. Please keep going and for the love of all things good update fast.
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Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Bonnie_C On: June 26, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave it there?! I'm so mad! You cut it off right at the good part...oh well, it just gives me a reason to keep coming back. Thanks for the hug! I really needed one today. I truly think you are so creative and your fiction is a thousand notches above the rest...your the only reason I read at Mediaminor. And the color game was very unique. I never heard of that before, I think I might actually play that sometime ^__^ I can't wait for the next chapter, I'll be checking back frequently ^_____^
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Title: hot
Reviewed By: BonC On: June 19, 2006 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the more I read your fics, the hotter they seem to get! I'm greatly anticipating the next chapter, your an awesome writer when it comes to having creative scenes and a good storyline. That's very hard to find in yaoi fiction but you certainly mastered it. Till next time ^___^
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Reviewed By: Light_Dark_dragon On: May 26, 2006 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this stroy so far please keep going.I hate it when someone starts a story as good as this and just stops. Its so original that i cant wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: roxaroni (too lazy to log in) On: May 12, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really like this. It's pretty well written and I love how I'm really interested in the story without any of my favorite couples being in here. That takes hardcore skill!
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Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: vixie_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 17:19 CST
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Please Update! That so sux 4 them! *cries* Please oh please oh please! Update soon! in the name of the few good Wolf's rain yaoi fanfics please update!
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Reviewed By: kageko On: March 02, 2006 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!! I've missed wolf rain stories sence not alot of people write them. your plot is great and i can't wait to read more!
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