| "Hidden Tactics" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Master Kei On: July 10, 2006 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was a fabulous Naru/Hina fanfic. Just building on what the other critics have said, you have definately combined your knowledge and great writing skill to create this one. Also, you did did really well, putting Shino and Kiba to lighten up the mood without being ridiculous. The way you savoured the process of the two actually falling for each other is impressive,because a lot of amateurs just blurt it out whilst you had structure. My only only problem with it is that it had to end, like all good stories! Keep at it with the great stories, and if you have any other Naru/Hina stories please post me them or their location at knight_of_trees@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: NARUTO MANIAC On: June 29, 2006 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need more make a new stry to add on to your original story that would be asome
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Reviewed By: hahafunnystuff [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, so cute! i like the way you ended it, it fitted your story. Good job!
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Reviewed By: kageguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I ALSO FORGOT TO WRITE THIS THE NARUTO AND HINATA PAIRING IS IMPOSSIBLY WONDERFUL UNLIKE THOSE NARUTO/SASUKE NINCOMPOOPS (YAOI AUTHORS THESE DAYS)
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Reviewed By: kageguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ACT AS IF YOU ACUATLLY KNOW THE CHARACTERS AND YOU EVEN TIME NARUTO'S CURIOUSITY AND HINATA EMOTIONS AND FAINT PERFECTLY WELL BRILLLANT YOU ARE AN ABSOLUTE GENIUS AT THIS
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Reviewed By: kageguardian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 08:01 CDT
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Reviewed By: noe mputu-mombo On: April 16, 2006 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it a very special story, and well use of the character like kiba and shino, they were funny always making deals and arguing. i lone naruto and hinata together. you should make your own anime
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Title: awsome!
Reviewed By: alex43_43 On: February 24, 2006 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome! I've been looking for a good *belivable* Naruto/Hinata pairing/romance. Most out there don't reflect their personalities at all, and is not belivable IMO. This one is, its very well done and very sweet. I SOOO am enjoying it! Please, make something else soom!
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update or i will die oh no *falls from chair and croaks* seriously please update
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: shamanprince [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was one of the best stories i have ever read. I liked the parts where you used japennes words. Keep writing this story i really want to read more later
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Reviewed By: hinata fan On: January 22, 2006 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe :) nice that was funny, and "cute" if u wana say that, lol like befor wright more asap
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Reviewed By: akashi471 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love hinaXnaru shiba and kiba were great too. this was the funniest fic i've ever read woooo! write more ur good
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Reviewed By: hinata fan On: January 14, 2006 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAN!!!!! that is soo f**king good i want MORE ur good at this i suck:( wright more soon!!!!:)
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Reviewed By: shine_nagai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda hard to find a really good naruhina here! your story is simple, but reallllyyyyy cute!!! go naruto, hug her more and make Hinata nose-bleeding!! XD
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Reviewed By: sakuradesasuke On: December 31, 2005 16:41 CST
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KAWAII!!!!! omg that was perfect between kiba and shino! i loved it! write more!
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