| "Best Christmas Ever" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Firekitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
minor spelling and grammar errors... but nothing too bad. My only real complaint was that the sex scene was rather abrupt. It really seemed to not fit. There could be more dialogue after Seto pushed him back down that could lead up to the sex scene or something like that. Either way, still a nice little lemmon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 11:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Not bad, it was a pretty good fic. You should try looking over your spelling, and if ur using the right words or not. Anyway, Cya!
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Title: *nods*
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad hon. I'm not one for doing Holiday fics myself, but this wasn't too bad *thumbs up*
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Title: U83R 1337 H4X0R
Reviewed By: U83R 1337 H4X0R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2005 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the grammer errors were big enough that is some parts i had to read it twice and durring a sex scene that can kill the whole thing so work on that a bit. and iv noticed this is true w/ most of the writers on this site, i find the sex scens are great durring the build up but when they hit acual sex the scen only lasts maby 1 or 2 more paragraphs while the preping and stuff was 6-15 paragraphs. lol loved the ending, keep up the good work
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