Title: Comment
Reviewed By: Clueless_Major On: December 25, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow,your story was very sad, yet enjoyable to read. You presented a fair amount of detail, not lacking, yet not too much that it may bore the reader. But I felt that you could do a little better. It is fine as it is, but I feel that with your talent, you can make it more-how do I say it, more-appealing to other readers. Other than that,you did an outstanding job!
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