Reviewed By: Evil Fang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again very good but a little on the short side. Also I spoted a few erorrs you might want to spend a little more time on reviewing your spelling or you might want to send it to a person to review it for you like a friend or something. Good story looking forward to reading more chapters. :)
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