| "The Obsessions (Part 1 The Obsessions of Love)" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: AR2* On: March 18, 2003 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis was fun! Ididn't pay attention to the grammer, because it was such a joy to read. It perfect |
Reviewed By: Eve On: January 19, 2003 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I could not really get past the first few paragraphs. Your spelling and grammar is very bad. You may not think it matters but it is extremely important, and it is one of the factors that sets apart an excellent fic from a bad fic. Now I am not saying that your fic is bad--like I said I couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. But things like grammar and spelling mean too much to me (not to mention it makes a fic easier to read) and I cannot sit through a fic where the author doesn't pay attention to simple rules such as punctuation and the like. Sorry, but maybe if you fixed that I'd read your fic. But I can't stand to at the moment. |
Reviewed By: i//U$i0n_2003 On: November 19, 2002 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great..but just work on the spellin' k? but otherwise it still ROX!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 01, 2002 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did enjoy this fic but there were many spelling mistakes which irratated me as such when you put she instead of he and other problems. I was concerned and rather upset when their child died. lol I'm glad you could move me. Well keep up the writing as I'm interested in reading some of your works.
Thanks for the fic its fantastic. Oh I apoligize for the flames, I'm kinda a hard reviewer.
Well good luck for the future, Ta Ta :) |
Reviewed By: Akudara On: May 05, 2002 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
No offense, but I think the subtle art of punctuation has been lost on you. Just so you know, punctuation really enhances a story by emphasizing points, etc. It also makes a story a lot easier to read. I think sometimes your tenses get mixed up too, but hey, no one's perfect. I like where this story is going. I've only just started the first chapter and it sounds good. |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2002 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good ending for a good fic! Bye and hope you write more |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you can come up with the chapter soon, and keep it up. |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 21, 2002 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, another cliffy. What will happen. Can't wait for the next chapter. bye |
Reviewed By: admirer On: February 20, 2002 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don't write another chapter "I will beat you into a pulp."-Vegeta, After Saving Goku from Android #19 |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 20, 2002 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! That was a good chapter! Thnk you for noticing my support, plus this is one of the best fics I've read! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 18, 2002 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What?! How could Vegeta do that!? Why did he do that?! Please make up for it next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Dragon_Optic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2002 20:45 CST
Comment/Review:
opps i clicked on the wrong story and i reviewed my own story ha thats funny |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 16, 2002 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish the enjoyment points went to twenty I LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IT. That was a really evil clify though I can't wait for the next chapter. Peace |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 15, 2002 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was really quick two chapters in two hours! Great I loved it please continue |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 14, 2002 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like where this is going please continue soon. |
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