| "The maid" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like!! I like!! I like!! I like!! I like!! I like!!...did I mention that I like it??:P that was a very good (and hot..damm!) fiction! good job!! *sign* now if only inuyasha was a real living person...awww at least we have the fictions and the authors :D thank you for making my day! kissies EV
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, it put a new spin to it.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: felicia On: January 01, 2006 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is really good!! its not bad at all and the lemon was excellent.. nuthing wrong with that either..
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Reviewed By: CB-chan On: December 26, 2005 12:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Actually that was a pretty good lemon. Not too bad at all! ^_~
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Title: Thats Great!
Reviewed By: Kairinu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How Dare you say your shakey with lemons that was grat the best lemon I've ever read! I think you should make a short story to go with this it would be really good^_~ Kairinu
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Reviewed By: Shrikant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2005 09:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice! :D Pretty good one-shot. You lost the flow a bit in the middle when you went on to explain the Kouga/Kikyo situation (could have shortened it) but otherwise one heck of a good story. Keep it up
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