"The Loved the Unloved And the Mistaken" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: animegirl25 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 10:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved the story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Angel~of~Fire On: January 18, 2006 00:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this story ROCKS i love it please please update really soon keep writing
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Reviewed By: Anoki On: December 27, 2005 11:09 CST Comment/Review: I like it. It's sweet and I wanted to cry. My only suggestion or request is that maybe you could make your chapters longer? But then they might be longer than they seem. Anyway, a wonderfully sad beginning and I hope you update soon.
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