| "Happily ever after?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: drummer_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2009 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, your spelling is a bit off sometimes, but keep up the great work. I really enjoyed your stories. I hope to see this updated soon. It's a good story.
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Reviewed By: Morjonse [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ett nytt kapittel!!!! ;) Så synd at det skjedde med Destiney altså, men jeg håper Kai kjører neven i ham ^^ Fortsett å skrive, fanficen går riktig vei :)
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Reviewed By: Morjonse [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastisk kapittel Kani :D Så nå skal hun endelig si det til kai :) Den serien hadde jeg heilt glemt ^^ Jeg har ikke lest mangaen så jeg vet egentlig ikke hvor mye det skiller seg ut. Det går veldig fint med meg og folket her ja :) Vi ble nettopp kvitt all den snøen heldigvis, vi hadde 1,5 meter snø rundt hele huset en stund her. Så du greier å se på Anime og sånn sammen med dine søsken :) Hvor gammel er hun?? Mine søsken er så irriterende :P
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Reviewed By: Morjonse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flott kapittel Kani :D Hun er gravid!! Kanskje vi får se ossen Kai er som far ;) Jeg har det kjempe fott jeg vettu :D Hva med deg da, ossen er det oppe i Bergen ?? Jeg har begynt å se på noen nye anime'r ja, Black Cat, Blood+ og Mai Otome :) De er ganske gode :D Håper du får opp ett nytt kapittel snart ;)
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Title: Flott
Reviewed By: Morjonse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flott kapittel Kani :D Veldig bra skriving og mye som skjedde i det, Syns Destiney har alle disse rare humor-svingningene. Fortsett med dette :) Ha en god valentins dag ;)
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Reviewed By: _Dream_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 12:41 CST
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god!!!! as soon as i saw this sequel i was filled with joy! i finished moving to california a long long time ago. i was looking for something new and i saw this. me and my friends love your stories and i just hope i can be like that with my stories. i was also wondering if you could give me some tips with them . Thank YOU ^_~.
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: gothic girl3750 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please. i just finished reading moving to california today and since there was a sequal to it i new i just had to read it keep up the good work and story writing
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Title: fantastisk!!
Reviewed By: Morjonse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'Â¥ er sequelen endelig her!! Det har ikke vÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'Â&brvb ar;rt lange ventetiden, men jeg har gledet meg veldig til denne. Synd at Destiney kommer til ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'Â¥ mase pÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'Â¥ Kai om barn og de kommer til ÃÆ'Æ'Ã'Ã'Â¥ krangle :( Fortsett med det gode arbeidet :D !
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