Reviewed By: niwings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
(10 being good) I like the idea and you did and the characters' personalites fit. Though there was a bit too much fighting discription for me, but some people like that. I plan to continue reading this fic.
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