"Another Dimensional Slip Up" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Mesa Juu-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 23:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LMAO! This story is hilarious - great job! You had some grammar issues and typos but overall it was an awesome fic. BTW I loved this part - it gave me the giggles for a while ^^ ' "Why did you even do that anyway?" "Um…it seemed the right thing to do?" "You're loopy, you know that Starscream?" "… Don't forget that I outrank you." '
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Title: LOL Reviewed By: D Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 08:02 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: The funniest fic I've read in a long time!!! Can't stop laughing...lol |
Reviewed By: Dark Wizard [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 00:44 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL! Waht a funny and exciting story! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten any reviews. The story is quite humorous, there's very little grammer problems if any, and the way it protrays the Transformers and Sailor Moon while making fun of their series is great! A very good piece of fanfiction! |