| "Dazed and Glazed" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Boring
Reviewed By: Street Shark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2016 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Onestly there's no need to spin-off your principal story with
anothere boring continuation.
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Reviewed By: Ub3rChief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great read. Write some more if you get the chance.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 04:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good to see that you are writing again. This is a great side story. I would like to see another chapter of your other story.
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 23:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I've been reading your other story "Mandate Of Hell" for a while now, and just saw you had this one up. I was wondering, is Dazed and Glazed kind of a sidestory to Mandate Of Hell, or an offshoot of it, or something like an alternate universe kinda thing? It's a really good story, and I hope to read more of it in the future. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Ugh
Reviewed By: NPH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 18:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a major problem with grammar, especially regarding run-on sentences.
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Title: Needs Improvement
Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 13:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whatever your story is, I can barely read it. There are too many spelling/grammar errors, everything seems smashed together, and it being some sort of SI/ACC story isn't helping it for me either. Seriously, you should go over your work, carefully proofread it, and maybe have someone else beta read it for you. I imagine if this story looked better, and was properly written...it'd be very enjoyable. For now, however, it just won't do.
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Title: really good
Reviewed By: loslomo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 09:12 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good start. can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Hakun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 03:32 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one bloody great story thats just going to get better over time. Just with the first chapter gives the story many great outcomes. The idea of Shinji on that sort of medication is surprising at first, but the first dose shows that it was the best idea ever. Can't wait to she what Misato and the other pilots do when Shinji starts using Kaji's advise.
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