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| "Roses In The Night" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: haru
Reviewed By: Liebe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like haru better. He is ten times hotter than yuki. let him get the girl. I normally hate love triangles but i'll deal with it for now.
| Reviewed By: Kasuri-hime On: December 31, 2005 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please whatever is said here, is only in my point of view, okay?...(^_^).... THESE ARE THE REASONS: I've put style of writing under 8 because it needs more characteristics...but don't worry it'll be fixed with a few editing....(^_^) Spelling and grammar under 9, because it needs a "little" adjustment....(^_^) Originality/creativity under 10..because..I liked it...why would I review if I didn't, right?..(^_^) Enjoyment factor under 8...because the fic could use some "flick of suspense", you know?...(^_^) Overall rating under 9...need "A LITTLE IMPROVEMENT"..that's all...(^_^) I wish you could use this as a guide...but no worries..the fic was a good one to read...(^_^) Rock on!!!!!!!!! Continue soon...(^_^)
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