Reviewed By: Chrsslayer On: December 29, 2005 15:46 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: This is off to a great start, I'm very glad you told me about this story. There are grammer mistakes but everyone makes them. Please update soon.