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"Heiwa" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2006 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm it left me wanting more and a little fustrated. It got across the overall sadness, loss and the pain of being thrown into the hell of war again. It left us with the feeling that there was no other way that this could have turned out for best, where they wouldn't end up back on the front line fighting for what was killed once again. Couldn't Quatre rise to the occassion? Or Zechs, if he lived in this universe? It makes one think how often in real life people do stupid things because of selfishness and don't think about how their actions will affect others if it gets them what they want. I liked it *snickers* yes, getting rid of 'lena is fun sometimes but gee the costs in this fic were great for that little pleasure. I love the wealth of emotion in Heero. ok i'm through now, update when you can or if your on break, have fun!
 Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2006 07:57 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Fascinating story. I liked it a lot. I can't wrap my head around Heero keening though. But Duo's thoughts were really great. Your writing is so active; everything is alive in the story. I can see every gust of air in the room. It's great. I liked the ending. And the quote about fate.

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