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Title: Wait a second...
Reviewed By: yumi_kei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha didnt i read this on FanFiction.net? ... i did! lol and i loved it! haha nice writing ;)
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: September 12, 2006 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was/is really amazing. Oddly I find it a bit more interesting than I expected. No OFFENSE. I just thought it was going to be mushy and I'm not the one for mushyness. But it, all of it, was really, really good. You're really, really good. And I'm looking forward to more of your work. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Korune On: August 10, 2006 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< ~GRR!! **not a bad grr... but a left wanting more grr =P** I'm new to this place, and I was NEVER one to leave reviews... But in all honesty... YOU ROCK! Umm... Yeah... ^^; Been searching for my fix on a good Legal Drug Ficcie (heh) ... Think I found it! ^_^* Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: choir_bird On: June 19, 2006 19:49 CDT
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Very interesting so far, hoping for more in the future!
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Reviewed By: i am chibiness On: February 08, 2006 14:34 CST
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Oooh, interesting. I kind of had a suspicion halfway through the chapter that Shinta somehow morphed into Yoji from time to time...but it's much better this way. ^_^
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Reviewed By: i am chibiness On: January 18, 2006 14:33 CST
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lol! Wow. The part with the vision amuses me for the simple fact that one moment Kazahaya's thinking about the vision he just had, and the next he's thinking about food. Aww, Rikuo's upset about whats-his-name kissing Kazahaya? How sad. *looks sternly at Kazahaya* You. Fix this, now. mwahahhaa.. ^_^
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Title: I like it ^_~
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when I'm logged in) On: January 16, 2006 20:02 CST
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I do love how IC it is, I only have one complaint. Some of the word choice feels a little bit akward, and some parts a little bit forced, so it doesn't really flow well, but I ADORE the plot and detailing beyond all reason. My one complaint aside, this fic. kicks MAJOR ass, rock on ^_~
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Reviewed By: colie On: January 08, 2006 19:25 CST
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awesome!! you updated! and two chapters while i wasn't looking!! that daydream was so cute. *snickers* Kazzy... that's so much easier than his whole name! i like how you're making their relationship go nice and easy, there's really nothing forced about it at all... it's kinda like reading one of the books really, with all the hints about their past... update soon!! ja!
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Reviewed By: i am chibiness On: January 04, 2006 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this. You should continue soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: colie On: January 01, 2006 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that rocks my face off! it's not often that you find a story that actually portrays their characters well (not knocking the other stories here, cause they rock too...). it's just that it's hard to make Kazahaya realize how gay he really is *snickers* you need to update to i can see how their mission goes!! can't wait to see more!!
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