| "The Vow: Broken Promises" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: starbrella On: June 24, 2004 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! AWSOME! AND I THOUGHT THE FIRST PART WAS AWSOME AS WELL. THIS IS ANOTHER MASTER PIECE! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Susan On: April 19, 2002 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that Veggie called her a whore. What an @$$hole. Maybe if Bulma kicks him out and starts seeing Yamcha again he'll come to his senses (I can't believe I said that-please don't shoot me). Great chap. |
Reviewed By: SS Venus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read The Vow and I really liked it. I'm glad you're doing a sequel. It's great. Keep going. |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Next.. chapter..
Now! ^_^ Please?
I read the ENTIRE "The Vow" this morning.. oh my kami, it isn't even MORNING anymore! O.O
Now I want more! I am so spoiled from getting chapter after chapter with a single click ;)
~Majin Niņa~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 04, 2002 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, but please write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 24, 2002 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, great minds thinks alike. A little competition may be what this relationship needs. Maybe that baka saiyan will step back and see what he stands to lose if he doesn't cut the crap and start treating Bulma with some TLC. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 16:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Not as good as the first one, but I liked it anyways. |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_grl On: March 05, 2002 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like where your going with this. but i do agree. i hate seeing vegeta die again and again...tear..pure torture. but nehoo, update soon! i want to read more!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, you should've seen me squeal when I saw this. I swear, my neighbors must think I'm sooo weird.
Anyways, this is good, of course....I like how you've started out. But (sigh) must I see him die again and again and again? I want to see him with a halo, durnit! lol Such an oxymoron that, him with a halo, at least, in Christian culture it is.
Yep, that was too short. Please, get the next out quickly! |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written...makes me want more...much more! I urge everyone to read this fic..its a real gem! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 16, 2002 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this alot. More, more, more. |
