| "However He Proceeds: Sesshoumaru Vignettes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: what did the letter say???
Reviewed By: j0yrid3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNIT! What did the letter say? *dies of curiosity* You are so evil! Anyway, I must comment you on the brilliant piece of writing. Although somewhat sad and slightly inaccurate in some points(Sesshoumaru meets with his mother in the manga and...the having sex with Izayoi part...daaaamn :) but still fun though), it still struck me because of your talent. You described Sesshoumaru's character very well and it was interesting to see him go through childhood, youth and then maturity. It was sad though...when Rin god old (I can't even imagine Rin being old :) ), but I guess that's the only way it could be. I can't help but feel nostalgic to see what he's forced to become in order to adapt to the future. It takes away his charm...It's like he's not himself anympore if he's not arrogant and powerfull and...demon-like. :) Still, I think this may be one of the best Sesshoumaru-centric stories that I have ever read! Good work, hun!
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 07:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Abso-fucking-lutely amazing. I especially loved the way Izayoi was desperate to seek Sesshomaru's favor... as all the women in his life seem wont to do. And the way he turned Rin down, but she wasn't too upset in the end, lol, you handled that wonderfully. You left a lot of fill-in-the-blanks, but somehow, it added to the story rather than detracting from it. Overall, great job, hon!
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Reviewed By: Kachiqua1 On: January 22, 2006 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a very enjoyable story to read. i liked how it went through his life and changes. the part with izayoi was unexpected but fitting with the story. i loved how you summed it up with him as a teacher and left the rest about his mother to the imagination.
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Reviewed By: _Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story! I like how you've explored Sesshoumaru's personality and had him develop over time. You even talked about Sessh mom! Nice. Plus, Sesshoumaru's relationship with Inuyasha's mom was a unique perspective. It was disgusting, yet fascinating at the same time. Overall, great job! I don't really have anything critical to say. I enjoyed the fic too much! XD
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe in the morning On: December 31, 2005 09:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Really good. This could have been a longer story. Did Kagome time travel and lose Inuyasha? What did the letter say?
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